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for Moonlight Sonata

by TerraBloodstar

schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far and I though it was too cute the way Draco stopped her from leaving and had her lean on him for support. It was like for that moment he was her rock. Can't wait for your next update.
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You've seemed to capture Ron quite effectively. Bloody stupid git that he is. lol I love how you portrayed Draco in this chapter, I think this is what's going to allow them to build a lasting relationship with the option of love. Great update, I can't wait for more.

On another note, I'm glad to hear that all went accordingly with the MRI....I've had one before, not so bad, just a little boring really...lol
person Larrabee
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hermione cannot get a break.

Can't wait for more. And of course for retribution to the Weasleys. You would think they would be more understanding after all she has been through, giving up everything to help Harry, and then losing her family. Only to have her friends posing as family constantly attack and judge her. damn...
person KellyJCR
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Boy do you have Ron pegged perfectly. That was great. I love how protective the twins are of Hermione and I love that Narcissa and Draco turned up straight away. Glad all your tests are done. Can't wait for an update. Great job as always!!
person kittycat30
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, he rescued her! I love it! The reaction from her "friends" was exactly what I was expecting. I can't believe you had time to write with all else you have going on, but I'm glad. I'm loving this story!
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh poor hermione
person Ceruse
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm only through the first chapter and already i love it. Your concept so far is great. Poor Hermione:(
person KellyJCR
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe how well you write Malfoy. I am enjoying your story so much I can't even tell you. patiently waiting for more. Keep up the good work and thanks for the timely updates.
person Byrony
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What an excellent story.. your writing is excellent as well. You make the characters sympathetic and likeable, which is quite a feat with the Malfoys. I love the addition of the twins and would love to hear more about Hermione's training with them, I am sure this has made her quite powerful. I think it is realistic that Hermione, Ron and Harry would have drifted apart somewhat, especially with Ron married to Lav-Lav... I look forward to your continuing the story and will keep an eye out for updates...: )
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my goodness that was absolutely wonderful im really really digging this story