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you are sooo awesome thank you soooo much for dedicating that chap to me it was PERFECT.... and it has progressed the story very nicely not to fast and not too slow just right you put a lot of stuff in this chap that was very needed and you gave us some more of the storyline nice... ok on with the review... jewel obviously feels something more for draco than she has for any other guy she has been interested in bc she is sooo hell bent on finding a way to help her be with him... jewels talk with minerva was very insightful, we got 2 things a hint as to who could help with the possible potion, and a little teaser for the storyline of cassies sister... hmmm i wonder if the forest that cassie's sister was killed in has anything to do with the forest that draco was hurt in, in her dream? and something that minerva said about cassie on her wedding day ... 'she looked sooo happy with john.....' sorry i am not going to attempt to spell the last name i know i will screw it up i did not put it in my notes... ok back to my thought... what does minerva mean by she looked happy i may be reading into this but it seems like there is more there, and it may just be that minerva knew first hand the struggles cassie had getting close to anyone and she may have just been reflecting??? ok the killer??? who is it and his statement about his mother being avenged... i am not even sure where to go with that i mean i do not think that you have hinted to anything in the past that could be a family vendetta??? ok and her mom and dad i think will answer a lot of this there was a conversation in one of the earlier chaps that her mom and dad had.... i kind of pushed it aside thinking that it would reveal itself but i think it is linked to this i am going to have to go back and find it and reread that chap... ohhh and i loved the part with sibyll and snape omg i laughed so freaking hard i can just see the look on his face the minute she got in that mode... i always thought that was a little bit of a show that she put on... ok now to DRACO.... well she told him to move on and he is doing that but i thought that it was funny that he was bored when she first saw the interaction then when she took over for the girl draco all of a sudden deepened the kiss and the interaction, hand on neck and then he placed his hand on her lower back... his demeanor totally changed and he knew it he stared at the girl i assume wanting to see jewel but not... and then he looked over at her he really felt her he knew where she was and he smirked another true draco sign that he had sensed her... ahhh and he was upset that he could not feel her anymore (drooping of his shoulders) obviously he still has strong feelings for her although he is trying to move on or wait for her is more like it... i absolutely love this chap it has moved us forward, i feel, with jewel as a whole... her great grandmothers secrets, and draco... and now we are starting to learn what the title means... at least that is my guess... i can not wait for your next chap ohhh i absolutely became goo when i read the draco part yumm..... great job... and here is my e-mail just in case you start a list??? smmz790897@yahoo.com oh and another thing how does this fit in with voldie... i assume that there is a connection? maybe but i am not sure where... through cassie.... through her sisters killer???... hmmm ok sorry another really long review... i look forward to your update :)

nice chap and i really like this story so far you write very well.... the interest that draco has in jewel is very believable bc she is in ravenclaw now if she was in gryffindor he would be more hesitant... i like this.....

hmmm how interesting she is thinking about draco a lot... and him her i am sure.... that was a great chap i love how you helped the reader as well as the class see why jewel was very much meant for this position and able to teach them things that they have yet to learn....

thank you sooo much i am glad that you appreciate the reviews and i will try to have lengthier(is that even a word??) ones ok and i am totally looking forward to my chap.. i have a funny feeling what it is going to be but i can not wait!!!!! ok sooo on with my review, and i took notes, I know i know what can i say.... i love what you do with hermione and ron you do not take up long paragraphs to explain their relationship you get exactly what you mean across in one or two well written lines... i love hermiones banter with ron.. oh and i laughed when you had them sitting down to lunch and they 'began the shoveling' that was a cute and accurate, in rons case, way to describe their lunch... ok the exchange in the hallway draco is sooo cute, and hermione is funny... 'he likes you..... and you like him' i can just hear the way that was said i love it hermione is very observant and jewel is very honest that is great all to often people write the interest in draco as a secret well the faster she admits it the easier it is for them to deal... and the end is by far my fave part it is easy to write the slytherins as a horrible group but to give them depth says something and i personally LOVE it... ok DRACO DRACO DRACO yumm oh sorry ok that was great all around the hand on her cheek in her hair all of it... and the promise that he was not going anywhere i can not wait til she can finally open up to him more and his individual reading that is going to be great... i wounder what she is going to dream about you hinted and i think i caught on to something with lucius??? ok on a side note i have a few favorite authors on this website and you are defintely(i never spell that right) one of them you write sooo smooth and your transitions are so easy to follow great job and i look forward to your updates

ok my interest is peeked... on to chap 2

interesting... and yes i like a forceful hermione as well esp in draco/ofc stories... i liked this chap and it was very much needed bc the weight of introducing someone new to the story and the main characters is very heavy you did a great job and it did not feel fake... i look forward to seeing where you take this

ok sooo there is going to be some pretty interesting developments in this story and you have hinted to some great storyline i look forward to hearing about cassie's sister obviously there is more to the story and the fact that lucius knew to close his mind to her immediately was interesting...

ok i like this so far... i hope you update soon....