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Ch 7 - So, what was that all about, that dream at the beginning? That sounded interesting. I'll have to keep reading to find out I guess.

Interesting explanation on magic. I'm going to definitely have to think about the philosphy of it for awhile. So, that's cool to think about something new.

How does she have classes all day and still have classes to go to? Wouldn't there just be 1 or 2 classes since it's the advanced class?

Ch 6 -

Questions: Other than a physical attraction, I'm uncertain why does Jewel likes Draco? But then I'm even more confused, why does it hurt for her to like him? And why does she want to like/be with him when it hurts her?

Then the obvious question of why does Lucius appear when she was thinking about Draco? But I'm assuming that last question will be addressed in the next chapter. ;-)

Maybe all these questions will be answered in the upcoming chapters. Hmmm...

Interesting beginning. I wonder if the correlation between Jewels and her great grandmother is just physical and personality or if there is something more. Hmm...

So, we meet the Gryffindor trio and the blond Syltherin all in one chapter. Very interesting. I wonder why Draco showed up right before she went to sleep. *Skips off to read the next chapter.*

What does it mean that Granny Cassie has a sister? Why did Jewel's parents get so upset? These chapters are small, but they pack quite a bit of information and storytelling into them. Well, I got to go see what happens on the train!

I don't understand why she wouldn't be able to feel someone else's hand? She would just know that person better than others. Or is she more like Rogue from X-Men?

HEEEEEYYYY ok so i know that in your last e-mail you said that this would be a filler chap but seriously it had some good stuff in it i hope that i caught everything, but i read this at work, sooo here goes nothing... ok so in the beginning you said that Jewel knew that draco had to leave early she could since him regretting to tell her... why did he have to leave early what is going on what is the need for him to leave so early??? sounds like somethings are starting to set in motion... and ahh his gift to her... 'It belongs to you now, Guard it well, my love.' omg how freaking sweet is that... ok so Jewel is sitting in the courtyard worried.... hmm and jewel senses the world around her and other people by emotions and hers are a sign for things to come esp with her own self, so what does this worrying mean? she keeps rubbing her necklace that draco got her obviously it has something to do with him... so harry is a little distraction for her that is good their talk will help her search within herself not just help harry find answers... ok so the topic of the day LOVE... of course harry is going to be the most curious of anyone regarding love the one thing that saved him... why do i feel like you are foreshadowing a little bit here in this conversation over love? here is the part of the story that i loved and i think will be the overall theme for this story.... 'Love is EVERYTHING. In my readings I felt it; in my life i craved it; and on the night of my birthday, i finally believed it.' wow that pretty much says it all doesn't it... Does harry have a little crush on jewel? i do not think so but their last exchange makes me believe that had draco not swooped in sooo early harry may have given it a go??? ok so her meeting with Dumbledore??? what is going to happen and what does he have to say to her???? obviously it is about draco... the whole mood of the chap points towards that and the fact that in the end she said she was prepared to hear what dumbledore had to say EVEN IF IT WAS ABOUT DRACO!!!!! Jewel was concerned in the beginning for him obviously his omen is about to make an appearance... and why you ask do i think that well the chap and jewel told me... ok lets look she is worried about him... well in previous chaps her connection to him has been dead on she knew exactly what he was going through by the way of his emotions and now that their BOND is more solid she should have more of a grasp on what is happening... she kept rubbing the necklace??? i think that there is more to that necklace.... and the fact that he left early has me scratching my head... what is going on there is definitely something at play here.. ok fabulous chap my dear I LOVED IT although i think it served its purpose in making me sit on the edge of my seat wondering what dumbledore wants???? THANK YOU for dedicating this chap to me i am honored!!!!! also you said that you were working on these next chaps well take your time you write so deep and with so much meaning that you can not rush that!!!!!!!!

YEAHHHHH oh my god that was a great chap I loved the whole thing, every single detail was perfect... ok here is what i got draco could feel her he was able to feel her heartbeat when she was with dumbledore, what does that mean??? well i think it means that their connection is deepening more on his side of things i would think and what could that mean well if jewel gets in a situation then maybe draco will be able to since her when she is trouble or needs him i wonder if their is a way for them to feel each others emotions maybe even connect not just in their emotions but in their minds as well? ok second jewel and draco talked about the night she took over the girl that he was kissing and i think hearing dracos side of things helps us to see more of their connection like you said before he is able to give us both sides of the story so to speak, and we are able to see into their 'relationship' completely. oh and when he was talking about this he stated that he thought that he could see her in the hallway i remember that part from the chap because he smirked... i loved how he said that he knew that girl was jewel and when he looked at her and saw the other girl he wanted to punch the wall... that was so cute in a very draco way.... ok something else when she was in his mind she was able to be their with him when he relieved his self and that was the key to breaking their 'shadows' oh my that was big bc that just completed them.... omg i just had a flash of jerry mcguire, 'you completen me'... some how i think that fits... i am not even sure that i can give this chap what it deserves i feel that my words are failing me when it comes to describing what this chap means for draco and jewel, i feel like they will be unbreakable now, and that their connection is so strong that they are..... ok i said it before.... complete... i turned to complete goo i loved this chap i think all your hard work was well worth it you did an awesome job and i think that you are a genius..... oh and something else did i catch this right? because of jewel getting in dracos mind and 'being there' she has overtaken the potion.... does that mean that she does not have to use the potion? if so that gives a whole new meaning to her and dracos relationship... like i was thinking maybe cassie used this potion until she found her draco and maybe became connected in the same way and she did not have to use the potion anymore so what does that say wellll it says that draco is jewels soul mate :) ok i am ready for the nest chap i know i know it has to get dark i got it i am bracing myself

YEAHHHHH ok i have to post this review quick it is really bad weather here and i am not sure how long the electricity will hold.... what a great chap the party was perfect.... first what a powerful moment in the beginning when Jewel was reflecting on draco... 'had I really known before that this... this warmth, this bliss, that this MAN is what i was once destined to never know.... oh my what a powerful and heart wrenching thought again another one that makes me want to scream GO LEAVE RUN AWAY WITH HIM... OMG i laughed soooo hard goyle being called papa bear how cute... and aaahhh draco is her who... that is sweet... Jewel was such a tease to draco when she sucked the icing off of his finger grrrr.... oh and i bet the REMATCH will be good to i wonder who will win... so we heard some of her past and i am assuming the bit about ravenclaw beginning related is the part that i should not worry about.... her old school sounds horrible it sounds like she received similar treatment that harry did when he first arrived.. i like how draco answered her he was very sure and he did not go into a long winded speech.. ok i can not wait for the next chap them racing each other to her rooms was cute and you can tell that all of this built up tension will probably get some relief in this next chap... like i said before that the weather here is horrible if i missed something i am really sorry i need to get off of the computer before the lights go out.... but again this chap may not have had a lot in the way of my puzzle pieces but it was a big one to understand more of the depth and need for jewel and draco to be together.... also another part i just thought of when he walked up to her and she felt his presence that was another sign of their connection.... nice!!!!! you are awesome!!! ooohhh wait another thing when she was dancing woth harry and draco gave her an ear full thats funny somethings never change....