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June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I liked this story. it has the fast-pacedness (?) i like in fics, it's fun to read and authentic.
Yet i'm also in favour of you writing the alternative ending, just because i'm curious to find out how you make molly react. again, great story. go, you! ^^
Yet i'm also in favour of you writing the alternative ending, just because i'm curious to find out how you make molly react. again, great story. go, you! ^^
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June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooops, i didn't see the alternative ending there. *blush* anyways ... i kind of liked the other ending better and i agree with the other person who reviewed here.
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June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK so you've written two extreme reactions however I can't see Molly acting like that. In my mind she would be all tears and blaming herself for what happened but eventually accepting their little boys as they are.
Other than that smut is hot *___* and both reactions of the twins are just perfect ^____^
Other than that smut is hot *___* and both reactions of the twins are just perfect ^____^