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by celestemoon

schedule November 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome idea. It has great potential, but it needs to be longer with more detail. And Mrs Weasley wouldnt accept it so easily.
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know this review is a little late, but I've only just read the story, lol. I personally liked the first ending the best. I've always thought Molly would be the very open-minded type of mother who would treat her grown children as adults and quickly accept whatever decisions they made, so it's the way I would've written her reaction too.
person Illyric
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked the first and the third. The second seems far too unrealistic, though. The first was humerous, and the third was cute.

Good job =)
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee. This story made me smile a lot! I, personally, love Fred and George! They're my favorite Weasleys and my favorite twincest pairing! And this story was just beautiful! I love the three different endings, but you're right. The third one is DEFINITELY the most like Molly. And it made me laugh! Just the kind of dazed "Okay, then..." lol. Brilliant!
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i think the last ending was the better of the three you had. it was more in keeping with molly's behaviour and of course the twins!

laters! ~_^ miko
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i also like this alternate ending best of all. i can picture her reacting this way. go, you! *thumbs up* :)
person aniay
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so very much more accurate!
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the last ending!
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Masterfully done, exactly the kind of thing I was hoping for when I posted the challenge and the alternate endings were a nice touch :).
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I could see Molly being shocked, but she would never disown her children. Family is very important to her after she lost her brothers.