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for An Unlikely Savior ~ (Edit) COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person Germania
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More Molly bashing, please. I don
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AS always, you have a wonderful grasp of characterization! About time somebody gave Molly a good thwack upside the head. (Where else do you find a human's reset button?) Sorry about your AC--it's still cold where I am.
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. I look forward to reading more when you are able to post. I hope that Severus and Hermione will be able to talk about what happened at the Burrow and also that Ron will be able to get his mother to realize that she can't treat everyone like little kids.
person Shawnie
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww! come on you can't leave us hanging! I really love this story and I think that you rock!
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ouch!
person mia madwyn
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! I didn't see this coming. Molly sending her food and Weasley jumpers and such made me think Molly was going to be good.

(I was on my way to bed when I saw you had updated and stayed up to read it!)

Good chapter! I loved the Quidditch!
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. I think that Molly should have just kept her mouth shut, but since she didn't, I hope that Hermione will be able to at least talk to Eileen and Severus about what happened. I look forward to reading more.
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was a good chapter!!! I loved the twitchy Lucius and Odessa's first day at work. Now, just work Molly Weasley in, and the entire Council will be afraid, very, very afraid...LOL!
person erisah
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm quite enjoying this- I can appreciate a good fractured family fic when I see one, particularly when you write the characters so authentically... I love your portrayals of Hermione and Eileen, they're quite fun to read.

Especially enjoyed the "Oh shit, not *that* woman part from Lucius... I absolutely cannot wait to see how this hearing turns out. Methinks it's going to be Hermione/Eileen/Snape 5, Board 1 (but only if they manage to embarass Hermione about how the rite came about). :)

schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more.