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Is this still going to be a Snape/Hermione fic? If not, I think you should change category so that readers won't be confused and misleaded.

The story is interesting though.

Another excellent 2 chapters. I'm really into the development of this story. The way you have all the characters coming together for a common cause is amazing! Looking forward to the next update!

Anon: It says clearly in the summary that this is not a romantically-based HG/SS story, but based on their interactions as people because of the child they share. All relationships aren't romantic, but they can still be volatile and interesting. I believe it fits in the HG/SS category and that's why it's here. There are HG/SS fics were there is just a friendship between them. There's a bit of animosity in this one, but still they interact.

Excellent. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

Only the second HG/SS story I have read, the non romantic pairing not withstanding. Man, I really want to hit Molly for being so insensitive! Eileen is such a strong character in so many ways, but almost too strong to let anyone else in. Then just when she thinks it's OK to let her guard down, Molly has to ruin it. I'm hoping she's going to let Alsop closer...he's trying so hard to get there! I'm not a huge fan of the epilogue, but you have used it to your advantage with the children. I really like the way you have written them. Good old Sev is just as snarky as ever, but it fits your plot. There are so many good things, I don't know what to say! Sorry to hear about your A/C; I lived in a mobile home for 3 years whilst building a house, and I know how hot it gets when the summer comes around! Looking forward to the next chapter!!!

YES! Hooray for a little bit of justice there. I was worried. A dodo bird. Awesome.

i just love this story. i check it everyday for updates. this story could go on for ever and i would love reading that long. keep it up.

Boy, Alsop really laid it on the line, pretty brave for a sixteen-year old. And Molly really is manipulative in her own little domain. Reminds me of my grandmother, really. (She'd have made Bellatrix brush her hair and wash off the makeup before she killed her, though.) I liked this chapter very much!

Arthur needs to be Pissed Off like Ron is right now more often.

A great chapter. I look forward to reading the next one.