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April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ya know, I can't help but think that young Albus is sucking around for an old fashioned, spoons-and-knives, kitchen sink, toolbag ass-whipping, the kind that includes nose, eye socket and cheek bone damage that never really heals.
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April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WilliamSpike: lololol. That's pretty horrible for Albus. I don't like to give spoilers, but that young man has some stuff going on with him that no one is aware of. I enjoy writing Albus, because he's honest, even if it's not what others want.
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April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Of course Hermione would find a loop hole in Severus' instructions...I'm glad her and Eileen have had their chat now, it's kinda cleared the air a lot. Looking forward to seeing what Albus is up to; he ought to get his comeuppance if Eileen is anything like as brutal as her good old Dad! Looking forward to the next update!
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April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
God, I love your Snape; A wonderful man while still wonderfully in character. In spite of all the horrid things he had to do while spying for Dumbledore, he was always a man of strong morals and convictions while admitably cynical. The fact that he died as a romantic martyr in the canon story slammed me, as I'm sure it surprised many. A man of passion, whether love or hate, and can hold a grudge like no one I know. What a personality.
Ok, enough gushing. Absolutely great!
Ok, enough gushing. Absolutely great!
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April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you work the transitions of character. Well done chapter! Pity the idiot that approaches Odessa tonight.
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April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to reading more.
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April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Eileen just had to try didn't she? It would seem it is not only Severus' world that is expanding; so is his heart. Its really quite heart-warming to read. Look forward to the next chapter!
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April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
even better chapter....
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April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wouah, great story, it's good to read a very very original one.
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April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful chapter. I look forward to reading more.