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for An Unlikely Savior ~ (Edit) COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person Robs
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I'm glad Hermione and Eileen are getting on a little better now. So, Odessa loves our Severus, does she? I hope they end up together, they seem to be a pretty good match. OMG Albus! Is that child stupid? Eileen will very much whoop his ass! Can't wait to see their duel! Look forward to the next chapter!
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to reading more.
person VoraciousReader
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Just loved the duel.
person Darkless
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wooohooo! GO, you tall, dark & snarky MAN!! I love it when he gets irate and wordy at the same time. *giggle*
person Robs
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Of course, of course, he found her and got her back. And got himself out of trouble very nicely too. Hermione is learning quickly how to be a mother to Eileen, and its good. That sentence sounds pathetic, but I hope you catch my drift XD. Dennis, bless him, I hope he makes the world see what Severus was lecturing them about. It would certainly make for some interesting reading further on in the story! Look forward to the next update!
person Robs
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens!! I can't believe Rita Skeeter is at it again! But bravo Ron for remembering her beetle form from before. Eileen sure is one clever witch, if she can make somewhere unplottable. Look forward to your next update!
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story.

I rather like Odessa and I hope she can come to her senses.

schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to reading more.
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mass obliviate? Way cool! Nice bit of foolish wand-waving, there, I must say. And I love you working Dennis Creevey into the story. Maybe he can get something done.
person Seraphiccandy
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, havn't read one of ur storys in ages. Been reading mainly slash but decided to stop by for some het action for a change. I'm in 7 chaps now and kinda wonderin why Snape wasn't more sneaky about getting Hermione to give her blood . You know, stun her, drag her over, take blood and then oblivate.lol.