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for An Unlikely Savior ~ (Edit) COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person kittycat30
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so hooked! Before I looked up Cernunnos, I was thinking Hermione's virginity would come into play. So, a nature and fertility God fits with that... maybe. I'm usually wrong when I comment on these things *sheepish grin* Oh well, I can't wait to see what you write next!
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Highly enjoyable.
person amsev
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yes, you seriously need to write more in this one! Now that you've set it up, it could go almost anywhere: Hermione finishes growing up and goes forth to do???? And Severus shows up just at ????? Wicked author, this is an excellent beginning!!!
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh come on! You can't just leave it hanging like that! I would love to see Severus collect his payment from Hermione. You have to at least write a sequal to this or something! Please! Pretty please with a cherry, sprinkles, hot fudge and whipped cream on top!

Your biggest fan,
Tiffany
person Ms_Figg
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol Gowvan. I don't "come up with them" per se; they kind of come up themselves when I'm doing something completely unrelated to writing and stick with me until I write what I see in my head down. Sort of demanding to be written. :::shrugs::: what can I say? I'm weird. lol. ***
person TERRI
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! I LOVE MOST OF YOUR WRITING (I DON'T LIKE DARK STUFF..SHUDDER)AND YOUR SEX SCENES ARE AMAZING. YOU MUST BE ONE OF THE MOST PROLIFIC WRITERS I HAVE ENCOUNTERED. I KNOW YOU HAVE A LOT ON YOUR PLATE, BUT THIS IS SUCH A GOOD PREMISE! (PLEASE LET THEM BE IN LOVE TOO, I AM A SUCKER FOR ROMANCE, GETS ME EVERY TIME)
THANK YOU!! (PLEASEEEEEEE)
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am such a sucker for the S/H pairing. I think I'm in love with your story now and trust me when I say that I'll be tripping over myself looking for updates.

I know you're probably looking for reviews that talk about grammar or maybe something about dialogue or perhaps the tempo and voice of the story but I, unfortunately, am only able to gush. I love it all and I am most certainly not one to turn to when it comes to mechanics and grammar and the like.
person Ms_Figg
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LCDrusilla: Lol. No. I'm relatively easy. A simple "I like it" works for me. I've done the deep critique thing in real life, and since I'm writing for fun, not necessay, although such in-depth reviews are welcome. So gush all you want. It just makes me consider posting more and gives me impetus to do so. ****
person gowvan
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oneshot! Oh no...can't stay a one shot.
This is just too good a set up. Love "Snape to the rescue"(admittedly with a grudge and for a price).

How do you come up with these premises and HOW do you make them all so equally yummy!)

Waiting with baited breath for more of this...please?? Oh Pretty please?
person Fiona
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg.. i was so scared for Hermione! Thank goodness Snape saved her! =]
Good start, can't wait to read more!