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for An Unlikely Savior ~ (Edit) COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person Robs
schedule May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! Severus just loves to wind Hermione up the wrong way, doesn't he? It makes me chuckle. As for their topic of choice, I think her view is a little antiquated, but that is a discussion for another time and place. Look forward to the next chapter!
schedule May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. I look forward to reading more.
person Emmy
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was great!! but i do hope that eileen doesnt get blaimed for what jennifer did... but good on her!! Albus is a toss-pot
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. I think Albus got exactly what he deserved after treating Jennifer the way he did. I hope he realizes that he could have had a girlfriend if he only would have been a little smarter. I look forward to reading more to see what happens.
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Swine Flew..hilarious. Painful lesson for Jennifer to learn..
person VoraciousReader
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, the most dangerous ritual in the mating process--meeting the parents! Alsop got a pair, that's for sure.
person Robs
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL at the flying pig! Can't believe Albus won, but at least Eileen wasn't too sour about it. So she's finally agreed? Poor Alsop, having to deal with Severus...can't wait to read that conversation! Look forward to the next update!
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, but that is horrible what you are getting ready to do to Alsop!!!! I really like him and I really think that Albus should so get his comeuppance from one of his siblings. I can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
person Densaugeo
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Happy Birthday (a little late) heh. I'll send you a fruit cake if you want XD I'm very good at baking. My mother has me make boxes of cookies and crap to send her friends every holiday, LOL