rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I like it. Please update soon.

OH WOW!! A DATE!!!! WITH A POTTER AT THAT GEES GIRL HAS NO TASTE KEEP IT COMING GIRL HAHAHAHAHA

LOL OMG i love this line...more than three knuts in his pocket....pun intended? id love to find a man with two knuts in his pocket....well thats not true....i like to find one with a nice thick wand...

Wonderful story, I love the characters. Alsop doesn't sound much like Harry though, or Ginny for that matter.

I love where you're taking this story.

I also wonder what's going to happen between Hermione and Severus....

Another great chapter. I look forward to reading more soon.

I've read pretty much everything you've written on adultfanfic.net, but I have to say that the emotional edge you brought in the story An Unlikely Savior completely blew me away. I already knew you were a great writer, but the last two chapters, particularly the very last one was absolutely beautiful. I honestly laughed at the funny parts and became teary eyed at the tender parts, and it's incredibly rare for words to make me that emotional. I love the little flashbacks inserted in the stories, they deepen the scenes and cement the characters. The way Severus dotes on his daughter, while still maintaining his rough edges is perfect. I don't think anyone on FanFic.net has quite captured Snape the way you have. Bravo.

-Sabrina

HEY THIS IS GOOD IM ON THE DEGE OF MY CHAIR WAITING FOR NEXT CHAPTER LOL, I HOPE YOU ARE WELL.

This is so clever! I had to smile at the introduction of Odessa. :) I look forward to more as you have time. Thanks!