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for An Unlikely Savior ~ (Edit) COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person Nicole/Buwee
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG.... my poor refresh button... I cant wait for 34

Ever Avid
person Darkless
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Forgive me for gushing, but this story is totally awsome!! I love how you kept everyone, and I mean everyone in character for such an inventive plotline. Severus' devious plan was sooooo him. And in later chapters with a righteously furious Hermione throwing her temper around and impressing sundry others was hilarious. Nice to remind Snape just why he chose 'the gift of a child' as repayment for the life debt. *shakes head* A life for a life just took on new meaning.

Nicely done and I can't wait for more.
person Emma
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter!
but i noticed another slipsie

person Ms_Figg
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Emma: Got it. :) Thanks again. ***
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter. I look forward to reading more.
person *DB*
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
@34 great chpater!! keep updateing!!

*DB*
person Sandra
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You do realise that at the last bit of the last chapter, Mr. Pettibone become Mr. Pettigrew, right? I don't know if that was a mis-type so i thought i'd let you know. Other than that, I love this story and can't wait to read more.
person Ms_Figg
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi Sandra: Freudian slip I guess. lol. But thank you so much for pointing it out. I've fixed it in all postings. Again, thank you. *** Glad you are enjoying the fic. :)
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for not reviewing before. I love this; you've brought up some very interesting points about everything from gossip to genetic engineering. If Lucius was afraid of Hermione's temper, can you imagine how he'll react when she and Snape team up to protect Eileen? Heads, wands and arses are going to be rolling in every direction!
person Ms_Figg
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
CuteDATSexie218: Oh girlfriend, it happens all the time, under the guise that it's "not official" then the info ends up in the legal arena. No minor should ever be questioned without parental consent, but it happens all the time. And not just to minors, but to ordinary people who find themselves in trouble with the law. Gotta know your rights. Ignorance of the law is no excuse.