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for An Unlikely Savior ~ (Edit) COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear!! I hope Hermione goes to talk to him xxx

Poor Eileen!!
person CB13
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi there!

Here's my favorite - "If he faced the Board alone, the result could be he
person GottaSayIt
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Im a huge fan of this story and im "accepting"(barely) that Hermione and Snape will most likely not end up "together" in the end(but a girl still hopes. lol). But I MUST pose an outcry...PLZ DONT LET SEVERUS AND ODESSA END UP TOGETHER...its just...ew.

I think my poor heart would break if i had to see that unfold. I mean, im still hoping that ron just dies off in the end and severus and hermione get some chance. But plz consider not letting him end up with a harlott...reformed or not.
person VoraciousReader
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like Odessa. She's a good sort herself. Snape needs someone to tell him that Eileen isn't going to abandon him, perhaps Minerva could say a few words about child development? Poor guy has completely crashed, but he'd better not abandon the fight with the Board!
person jlclark
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story and I also wanted to say thank out for your quick and steady updates.
person VertPin
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved the two chapter before this one, a bit less enthusiastic about the last, Hermione seemed different from the scenes that happened with the ministries people.

I was wondering... after this story (i know that you have planed some other fics) maybe it be possible that you wrote an AU/sequel of this fic about a love type bond happening between H and S ? Cause i'm dubitative about the Ron-Hermione relation, he seems to my like a carpet compared to the hot-spiced hermione, their relationship don't appear to be whole for me.

VertPin
person Emma
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
is his name Pettigrew or Pettibone?
u start saying pettibone, then minvera says pettigrew (which i assumed was done to annoy him)
but then
"Startled, everyone turned to look at the door and saw Hermione standing there, pointing at John Pettigrew with one finger as she snatched her Weasley hat off her head."
person Ms_Figg
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi Emma: It's supposed to be Pettibone. I corrected it last night (you can see a previous post thanking Sandra for pointing the error out) but I must not have pressed the edit button. It was a mistake. Thank you for pointing it out or I would have thought I corrected it. ***
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful chapter. I am glad that Hermione and Severus are protecting Eileen. I can't wait to read the next chapter to see what happens.