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April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter, but I noticed you changed the names of some places. You wrote Leaky Tavern instead of The Leaky Cauldron, and had the kids riding the train to the Hogmeade Station instead of the Kings Cross Station.
You also had the holiday Boxing Day written as Boxer Day.
I still look forward to reading more.
You also had the holiday Boxing Day written as Boxer Day.
I still look forward to reading more.
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April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Heidi: Thanks for pointing out those errors. I think I was writing a bit too fast and proofreading too slow. I'll fix them. Thanks.
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April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. Just utterly brilliant.
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Those warm fuzzy moments tend to send the day off well. Also, glad you added the dancing, the world would be a better place if all fathers danced with their daughters. Mine did and I am always grateful.
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you portray Snape, but I must say this, it is barely bearable to continue to read knowing that you wil not have Hermione and Snape together. And it is extremly hard to imagine that Hermione could be happy with Ron. However I reall enjoy your Severus and Eileen's character is very original. Though Odessa is a nice and rather moving person, I beg you: don't let Snape end up with her! This just cannot happen. It would be totally out of character for him.
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi Izzie: I'm sorry you're finding it difficult to read an HG/SS story that doesn't have them romantically involved, but I have to stretch my creative wings a little, you know? I think I should write at least one story where they aren't physically intimate. At least one. I have dozens where they are together. This time, they're together in a different way. You don't want me to leave Snape lonely do you?
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you. Truly, that was beautiful. I was touched.
~Mia
~Mia
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
when is there snape and hermoine???
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A lovely chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful chapter. I look forward to reading more.