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by sugypunk

person oztan
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS REALLY GOOD.
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Very Awesome Story! I hope you continue it! I've read all of the chapters so far. It's awesome. you've gotten the characters down so well. I'm a huge [Dramione] Fan and I hope you continue with this story!
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! I'm definitely looking forward to reading more. And you're welcome for the help. Anything else you need, feel free to email me!

Keep up the good work!!!
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loooooove it! No OOC, believable characteristics, good writing. And I love the cliche of them sharing a commmon room. Screw everyone else who thinks it's been done too much. If you write it in a convincing way as you have, it makes it logical.
person risotto
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so Nevile is gay? Now that is an interesting twist.
person risotto
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ouch, now the head butt has gotta hurt.
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story so far! I do like it when they have to figure out they like ( aka not hate) each other,but still have to work on the rest! Neville's pegged beautifully! *tosses some plot-bunny treats into cyberspace for ya..*
person himitsu
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story :D Your writing style shows great promise, and I can't wait for you to come out with the REAL drama :DDD
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hullo! Wonderful story so far, dear. Can't wait to see where this is going.

If you want to use italics, put this "" at the beginning of where you want the italics and this "" when you're finished. Only don't use the quotation marks...I put those there so that I could show you what to use. LoL

Update again soon, dearest!!!!!
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ugh! ON second thought, email me at moonstar_75@hotmail.com and I'll tell you how to make italics. ^__^