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This story makes me so happy. The kiss was electrifying! So, I just knew that Draco was going to kidnap her away to Malfoy Manor and ravage her body on his green and silver silk-covered mahogany four-poster bed to slake his uncontrollable lust for her slender, yet lush body. What a naughty boy. Whoa! See? It's all your fault. Your story has unleashed my imagination. But can you really blame me for it? I mean, come on, look at him! So tall, so blonde, so fictional. *sighs* Crap! There I go again.

hello. this story is wonderful...
keep up the great work. I really enjoyed chapter 8! great job!!1

What a totally excellent first scene! It made my stomach flip-flop just from reading! If he hadn't apparated away, paced, and then come back it wouldn't have worked nearly as well. Loved the pink goo scene. Super duper loved the stone. I also really like the way you write Neville. He is so...so....(damn, I can't think of the right word), well, I like his personality. He seems comfortable. The book presents were great too. I've been trying to think of what my Hr and D are going to get each other, if anything and I'm coming up blank. Anyway, great job. Man, a kiss and now they are at least 2 weeks away from seeing each other! Torture.

Fabulous!! There's mabsolutely NOTHING wrong with long chapters! LoL

Update soon!!!

lol....there should be a special warning just for the inclusions of images of McGonagall in a g-string, holding a bullwhip... *shudder...* *giggles and ducks as a transfigured cream pie flies over my head..."Sorry Professor!"*

woooo hooo sugy! This is shaping up excellently. I don't know why, but I especially loved Draco writing in the notebook and flying. Maybe I just like the idea that Draco is actually focused and capable - good work ethic or something. Nice work!

ooh I can feel her squirming in her seat!

that's fabulous! She head butt him. I'm a big fan of head butts myself. I have an exceptionally hard skull. Okay, off topic, sorry. I loved when she said I think I made a mistake. Not surprised you named the chapter after it. but man, i wanted them to kiss.... good job!

Ha! we both put Draco having muggle lit in his collection. Like the Dickens - with I'd thought of that. :) Ohh and McGonnagal matching them is great! Love it, love it!

LOL. head prostitute! That's funny. well, this was great and I want know what his boggart is, and he seems ready to make a move on her....is he? is he? Can't wait!