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by sugypunk

schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Don't leave it like that. Please update soon! This is a great story.
person ilke
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! What? What happened? IOh crap, you've got me scared. There were so many wonderful parts to this chapter, and no all I can think of is what made Draco's blood run cold. Shit! I'm going to have to go back and find them again and leave you another review. It is a wonderful story!
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so you're just evil. That's all there is to that. LoL Seriously...how can you do this to me?!?!?! *sigh* Just update again soon, dearest and all will be forgiven! ^__~
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! I like the maturity they've both gained (slowly - ha ha ha) and the way they've been drawn together despite their best intentions. McGonagall is one smart witch. ;-) And, you are one good writer. Keep it up and please update again soon. Thanks! HG4eva
person ilke
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! I'm so glad they are stuck together at Hogwarts and will have to deal with their misunderstanding. Can't wait for more, more, more!
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh...I've always loved a "selfless" Draco. It's so much nicer than a "spoiled-little-rich-pureblooded-snot-nosed-git". Definitely know about the in-law thing too...although I have to admit, it's mostly my sister-in-law. LLC!!!

Anyway, keep up the good work, dearest! Look forward to the next update!
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this, I dont know if Ive reviewed it before now or not...I sometimes forget...anyhoo, lovely story!!!

Happy Writing!
~SG~
person Gertie
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really loving this story, and keep letting these excited giggles out while I read. I can't wait to see what happens. (and my inlaws are only about 10% evil, but I feel for you)
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't help it..oh I'm laughing so hard now. The word "elusive" eluded you! *rolls around giggling* Ahhhhhh my sides hurt now. Anyways, great chapter. I loved how after a crisis, Hermione jumped to the wrong conclusion, of course. Hoping to see more now that the inlaws are out of town!
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying it thus far, I like the idea and the fact that you've made the older teachers a bit more real by having them cooped up in a school all year wanting to get out some sexual frustration. The kiss in chapter 8...ahh, that was perfect. Having Draco apparate back was so well done.

Must not let the editor in me get out...must not. I swear that's going to become my new mantra. ARGH. Psst, it's elusive. :D *flees from angry writers*