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Well, there's a time and place for everything....even 'not so honorable' things. :D

Hey girl! So, I just went back and read my reviews so I could remember what I had written before and what you were referring to in your end notes, and I came across the head butting reference. And then I had a head butt too! Me thinks we are subconsciously influencing each other! What a hoot! Great minds and all that...

I really dig The Adult World. This last chapter was a hard with the girl dying. That seems like the kinda thing that can crush a person with guilt, even if it wasn't their fault exactly. But it was well written and of course sex is hanging in the air. (You totally did what everyone is always yelling at me for - huge ass cliffhanger! But, I don't know, it often feels like the right place to stop for me, and now I feel like I have a partner in crime.) Keep up the good work. The next chapter promises to be HOT!

I am really enjoying this story. I somehow missed an update, so I just got to read two and as a very impatient person that was a good thing. I am so glad I didn't have to wait to see that she was okay. I hope Hermione isn't blamed for the student's death (so sad btw) even though I figure the girl's parents will do so. And, I love Draco for trying to say no; very honorable and sweet. But, I love love love him for giving in finally. ;-) I can't wait for the next update! Thank you. HG4eva

I think you should leave Trevor's name as is. Almost as if they were fated together. Is that too gushy? I love that Malfoy pulled his wand on her. I love this story and can't wait to see where it goes.

Leave the name as it is!! I think maybe the student got revenge...hope to read more soon as its a great story xxxx

Well, this looks quite good, as a first couple of chapters! Liked the premise, and of course the tension was fine. I look forward to seeing how you develop the story. :D

And so it begins! ;)

A lovely couple of chapters....can't wait to see what the holidays bring. :D

Glad Hermione got out of that with her skin and virtue intact! And goodonya for having Draco do the honorable thing. :D

Firstly, I vote for keeping Neville's amour's name to be Trevor. I mean, it might be the reason he hooked up with him in the first place, no? Trevor holds a special place in Neville's heart, being his familiar, and all. So, I say, keep it. Nextly, the make-up scene was fine. I just can't wait to see if Amanda's ok. :D