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by sugypunk

person Tiffany
schedule May 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!!!
person lilywilson
schedule February 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i agree with the headmistress thing and then you had to go and mention the head prositute thing didnt you cos i got the mental image of mcgonagal as a prostitute... im loving the story by the way its cheering my sunday morning right up so thank you xo lily wilson
person alessandra
schedule August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi, love love love this! It's been so long since an update, I hope it doesn't end there?? Well done but keep writing!!

:) :)
person magical
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I always love Draco & Hermione living in close quarters. It's more fun when they're professors! Update soon!
person loolupe
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was hot stuff! What is it about a wild shag in the library that makes me so crazy?!
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am very intrigued by your story and I think your are doing a fabulous job portraying the various character's interactions. A few critiques would be to make sure that your grammer is correct and you aren't adding miscellaneous words to sentences. Also check your contraction you're and make sure you are not confusing it with the pronoun your. However, I am very fascinated by this story and I am looking forward to reading more. Keep up the great work.
person casey
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahaha Hermione would have been mortified when Pince almost caught them at it :) lol
Great chapter!
Update soon plz!! :o)
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
fantastic!
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh great chapter!!!
hahah library sex is fun... :-D
person ilke
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent sugylove! Love that he asked her out on a date at the end! And the tete-a-tete with McGonagall was priceless! Heh. Wonderful! I love the progression of this story and your telling of it! :)