rate_review Reviews

So, is that it?  Or does the story continue under a different title, or on a different Fanfic site?

First, the author has done a pretty good job of exploring the characters feelings, motivations, and lives post DH.  Like most Fanfic on this site, it still needs some editing work!  Too many “to”s  that should have been “too”s, too many mispellings and other typos (my favorite was ‘Whales’ instead of ‘Wales’).  Still, a generally good job of exploring the relationships between Harry, Ginny, Ron, and Hermione.  Which brings me back to my opening: it ended rather abruptly!  Ron & Hermione seem to be headed towards a wedding.  Harry and Ginny seemed headed towards an engagement, and both couples seem to be headed towards some normal, healthy, sexual interactions with their partners!  As this is an adult Fanfic site, why are they always interrupted before they get to the actual lovemaking?  It’s unrealistic to leave the characters (and the readers) hanging and frustrated so often, and not have them act on it!

This is a good story. The grammar needs a bit of work, but a good beta could fix that. Do you have one? I can't wait to read another chapter. Do you know when you will have another chapter out?

Cosmyk

A nice story spoiled by silly spelling errors and missed words. For example, whales are large sea dwelling mammals, the country is Wales Holy Head should be Holyhead. Lots of other small errors, probably caused by your mind working faster than your fingers can type. I have to admit some of your errors did give me a laugh.