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for Wicked Taunting

by Tassanaburrfoot

schedule October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I am really enjoying your writing. I am slowly making my way through your stories. You are very skilled and are good at writing the emotion as well as the sex.
My one criticism for this particular piece is that you had Draco specifically ask her to tell him what she liked by word or deed, but it didn't feel to me like you really had her follow through on that, or have him notice it if she did. It wound up being about what Draco felt.
It was still well written and enjoyable, just felt like that plot point got dropped a bit.
Keep up the great writing!!
schedule November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was Hot! I'm only slightly disappointed that it wasn't a threesome.
person jaceni50
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank god she didn't sleep with Snape! I'm not sure if I would've been able to stomach it, LOL. Not a big fan of that pair. :) This is a great series and interesting as well. If you were to make this into a story it would be great too, but I know that writing a full story can be stressful, so don't blame you on that. Hope you continue and give closure when the time to end it comes. :)
person mlui
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The word 'wicked' definitely suits its title. I liked the series except for Hermione being forced into it...if he had persuaded her into going on a date and getting to know each, maybe that wouldn't be so bad...and Snape -- that's so bad of him. But then again, he's Draco's Godfather...will there me more? I hope there will be! =)
person Anon
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dee-lish. :)
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is getting truly intriguing :) Still, I feel pity for poor Hermione...
Hope you keep writing ^^
person Anjuli
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the third part of your series and look forward to reading more of it.
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it...though I must say, as a Snape lover Im a little sad he didnt get to play...poor thing.

Happy Writing
SG~