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December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! she's out....
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December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you plan on updating again soon. I am loving this story.
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December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and I hope Draco will get his reward (meaning kiss) from Hermione in the near future.
Somehow, though I'm not yet sure you're actually going with Keller als the villain, the plot reminds me of Dan Brown. Have you read his novels? ;-) It might make a nice twist (and not seem so much like his plot lines) if you threw another bad guy in the equation. (And I do think Blaise is a moron who should not become Minister for Magic *lol*) Just my 2ct!
Great story, very creative, definitely out of the ordinary and I really cannot wait for the actual smut to develop between our two major characters :-)
Somehow, though I'm not yet sure you're actually going with Keller als the villain, the plot reminds me of Dan Brown. Have you read his novels? ;-) It might make a nice twist (and not seem so much like his plot lines) if you threw another bad guy in the equation. (And I do think Blaise is a moron who should not become Minister for Magic *lol*) Just my 2ct!
Great story, very creative, definitely out of the ordinary and I really cannot wait for the actual smut to develop between our two major characters :-)
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November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is amazing. I love your story.
I just started it and read all the way through.
It's so original and creative.
I can't wait to read the next chapter.
This is wonderful, Keep up the great work.
Please update soon! :D
I just started it and read all the way through.
It's so original and creative.
I can't wait to read the next chapter.
This is wonderful, Keep up the great work.
Please update soon! :D
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November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow what a chap... i have been sooo busy i finally got over here to read this chap and i noticed that you updated yeahh... ok so i am not really sure what to make of the situation with harry i mean the reason that willow gave is a good cover... and wow draco boy does he not know how to make hermiones blood boil.. ok so on to the next chap
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November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well well what a great chap!!!! love it totally.... so i really like that draco has matured enough to not lash out at hermione when he felt the guilt from the incident with astoria.... and speaking of her... draco mentioned to hermione that no one has been to his apartment since the accident at pearls but astoria was she came to his apartment that very day... hmmmm interesting... also i like that draco did not want hermione to leave and that he was almost desperate to make her agree to stay.... so ginny had to resort to slytherin tactics to make harry and ron sleep but look when harry slept he woke up with a revelation... i wonder what it will be... so we are going to find out who the accomplice is wow... ok sooo hmmm that means we are going to find out who the guy is????? gosh i do not even know who to think??? but i think i may have to lean towards blaise, since i am trying to go for astoria to be in on this some how??? great job!!!!
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November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story. Update soon!
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November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful update...of course, Hermione's dream lover is sitting in his bedroom, yeah? I am even more interested in the mystery, though. Hopefully, Draco's Warded his living space so she won't get taken, again. Keep updating! :D
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November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK so i have been soo busy and have not been able to read these two chaps and OMG is this first one good or what!!!! Holy crap we are getting so close i can feel it!!! when i read this chap i felt like i was sooo close to discovering who it was but then it would slip from me.... ok so it is obviously not coincidence that pearl and the art gallery guy are both dead... hmm some one really wants them out of the way.... ooohhh who is following draco and what happened to harry I like that he does not trust her because duh she is probably the one doing all of this stuff... i wonder who willow truly is.... like could she have a glamour??? and where is her art studio.... ok i am going to try to read the next chap but i may not be able to till tonight or tomm but i can not wait!!!!
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Have fun in Seattle...and I agree about Sage. Thanks for the update! :D