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by ColdWaterFairy

schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! So he got her out of the painting and Ron and Harry have some rather good leads eh? Great update, I can't wait for more!!
person belladonna
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I love all the mystery and suspense as well as the little moments between Hermione and Draco of course. The wit and humor you use in your story is truly funny. I loved the bit about Monty Python and about Snape and bat like qualities. Great stuff.
person marieve
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG SHE PUSHED HIM!!!NOOOOOOO!! lol Stupid Hermione! I Love this story sooo much! I can't wait for you to update! :D
person Tals
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!!
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
IM HOOKED!!!
person Anon
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it, I keep rereading in hopes your updates will arrive faster :)
person Anon
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say you are a REALLY talented writer in both fics that you've written. You're so charming and convincing with your words. I'm in love with you! :) Don't stop writing anytime soon!
person kazfeist
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! She's free! That makes me feel better. Now, let's get the others freed, too. Nice plot development in this chapter, and I can't wait for the rest. :D
person Adriana
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I just read the entire story that you have posted so far, and it's excellent! This is truly one of the better fanfics that I've ever read. Congratulations on a job well done, I'm looking forward to your next update!
person smmz79
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yaaaahhhh.... nice chap... ok so i am not sure that i am convinced that keller is in on this.... he did like hermione so why would he kidnap her and this helper seems awful wrapped up in willow so i am not sure that if it is keller he would not have been that upset about hermione unless he is mad that he had to do this to her maybe willow forced him to because she was getting to close... hmmm but blaise and the minister was there as well i think i am going to agree with ginny and look at the big picture because if it is not keller then we are definitely missing something... ooohhhh this is going to be good :-)... ok so how sweet of draco trying to get hermione out of the painting.... he really tried very hard so i wonder what she is going to do now? is she going to contact harry and ron which i think that she should do but still stay with draco bc they do not want anyone to know she is back bc then the attackers will be after her... of course they could use her as a plot to make them come out of their hiding... ok so astoria came by again, hmmm i am not sure that i am convinced of her innocence??? i guess we shall see... and draco got her out and they almost kissed hmmm wow i can not wait to read your next chap to see what happens and what harry and ron do and especially what happens with hermione and draco... i just love this story you have done a fabulous job and have written the suspense and esp the love scene perfectly!!!!
person Bella
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Darn! I'm glad she's out but I was really looking forward to a mutual masterbation scene while she was still stuck in the painting! Oh well, guess we'll just have to settle for good old-fashioned intercourse. Sigh.