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for Say Please

by ColdWaterFairy

schedule May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I appreciate the Princess Bride nod. Yay ROUSes!
person mlui
schedule May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, you've updated! Yaah! This was a fantastic chapter and I can't wait for the next one! I'm glad they can calm each other. It was perfect. =)
person smmz79
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow i go out of town for a while and you updated i was sooo happy to see that when i returned home... great chap i think you did a fabulous job on the sex scene i love that draco wants to keep her around instead of doing the whole one night stand thing that he normally does... it was very well written... hmmmm we have a lot of interesting things coming up hermione may be making a job change, a possible relationship with draco, draco and the whole drama with his family, and why do i have a funny feeling the blaises partner in crime is in hermiones flat.... i still say it is astoria hmm i wonder what will happen next great chap... i cannot wait for the next
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, just read through this whole story!! It's brilliant! :D
A very original idea! I like it!
Keep up the good work and please update soon!

Casey
xoxo
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmm, Narcissa coming back threw me completely....and what is off in Hermione's flat...she needs to follow and listen to her gut.
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what it is about this story that I enjoy so immensely, but it is what it is. I love it. Their joint insecurities are so darn heart-tugging. Kudos to you on a job really well done so far. And, their first time was perfect for them. I look forward to more really soon! Thanks, HG4eva
person mlui
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I hope that weird chapter doesn't have anything to do with Willow Suntree. Please update again soon! =)
person kazfeist
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update....and damn you for putting her back in danger! :( Anyway, I'll friend you, if you like. My LJ name is the same as here. Keep updating. :D
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so far! I can't wait to see what happens next....
I am a Twilighter, too! You're a better friend than me, because I couldn't stop myself from reading Breaking Dawn. I won't go into specifics since you haven't finished it yet, but if you want to talk about the book later, I would love to discuss! The Twilight series was the first since Harry Potter to capture/hold my interest.
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So I love this story and I have to agree, I am OBSESSED with the Fallout. It is the most living, raw story I have read in dramione land!