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by ColdWaterFairy

schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, dear, very nice! I'm looking forward to the next update! ^___^

Just one little thing....it's "Voldemort" not "VoldeRmort". Just thought I'd mention it.
person smmz79
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome chap... i love that draco was dumbfounded when he realized that the painting really was hermione... so is draco going to help her with the case i mean he is in danger as well bc once he goes snooping around it will be found out that he has a painting and those people will try to get to it which means going through him... i like the stress that you are giving harry and ron and how each is dealing... ron still having feelings for her or realizing that they are still there and harry needing to be close to ginny... great chap!!!! ok so i was wrong with my earlier guess, huh well i will just have to try again then and the painter could she be someone we know???
person kazfeist
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! Can't wait for more (Ch. 5, that is). :D
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH pretty please update soon It's amazing, I love it so please please please update soon, cuase I'mdying to know what happen that send the little dragon into a fright?
take care

Love,
Lola
person BabyV
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is awesome. The best fanfic ever!
person iHeartDraco
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so interesting,cant wait for the next chapter
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, greg sort of reminds me of Dudley in the last book ^__^
And what exactly did you mean by "moving the girls from the background"? As in, free movement within the painting, like other wizard portraits? (which now that I keep thinking on it seems like the right thing :-X )
Looking forward to what he saw/is seeing!
person kazfeist
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Margot: WONDERFUL story! I can't wait to see what happens next. Would you email me when you update? Kazfeist at gmail dot com. Thanks so much. :D
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, that answered my question about whether Willow was involved in what's going on or not. And the dinner was every bit as uncomfortable as I thought it would be. Interesting that it was Greg who had the crush on Hermione rather than Draco, and that he recognized her image in the painting because of it. But, will Draco understand that this is Hermione trapped in a painting rather than just an image of Hermione? And, will Hermione herself even know? Now I'm left wondering what's waiting for us over the edge of that cliff you left us on. As ever, I enjoyed this chapter and look forward to more.
person smmz79
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
was that the magic words... did someone have to recognize her to free her???? ok great chap, so since you are waiting on your friend to catch up with you in your book how about updating again... i just have to know what happens to draco and if hermione pops out.... oh and i think the night auror at the door is the one that is helping the painter... bc he seemed really interested in what hermione had to say about it!!!!