AFF Fiction Portal
errorYou must be logged in to review this story.

rate_review Reviews

for Say Please

by ColdWaterFairy

person Tasha89yoho
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god this is getting so good! cant wait for more chapters, and ur not the only onfe i reliogoisly read the fallout! dam iv bin waitin fer an update for fervever!
person Anon
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Such a good mystery, and I love a devious plot, please continue this!
person miakitty
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
need more,
person sabina13
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your not the only one following "The Fallout", I'm loving it. I'm loving this as well though. Good job so far, very well written.
person nitesfool
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the plot's coming along quite nicely.... keep up the good work!
person smmz79
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok first THANKKKK YYYOOOUUU for dedicating this chap to me i loved it esp draco wanking in the shower to an image of hermione that was great!!! ok so she will owe him a wizards debt huh.... that could be promising.... poor harry and ron that had to be horrible and right when they turned her over you went to a part about draco and hermione i was tempted to skim down to see what happens but i waited.... ok so appearance can be deceiving huh.... well i am voting for the minister or percy???? oh and could you put a link to that sage story on cg i have a hard time finding that website, i would love to read it
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay so this is amazing! I've been putting off reading it because I've been reading so many other stories that I didn't want to overwhelm myself. But I couldn't talk myself out of it anymore and I'm glad! This is so good. A very original and different type of story and I can't wait for more!!
person nitesfool
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DAMN!!! THIS STORY IS SOOO BLOODY GOOD!!!!I'm very interested to see how u intend on devoloping the plot and mangaging to keep hermione at draco's place now that he knows it's her... and i wonder who the auror is... i'm thinkin it's the one who handed her the paper. oh yea... i like the way that harry broke the news to ginny... him needing her physically as an out put to his frustration and dispair was totally believable and i myself have actually done that before. Blaise... aaarrrccckkkkk ( i'm not quite sure what that sound was and/ or what it was about)!!!! i can see him doing that and he actually reminds me of a slytherin version of Percy. ok.. i guess that's all for now... i'm eagerly anticipating ur next post!
person Coipje
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think Zabini did it
person smmz79
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOHHH what in the hell is happening.... you have me sitting on the edge of my seat... ok so obviously the body of the missing girl is some bread crumbs that the mystery guy was talking about.... it sounds like draco and hermione will have a little bit of a rough start although he does seem willing to help her if only to get her out of his flat... but if that was the case then why didn't he just call on potter or weasley??? so the old woman was dead i wonder how she died... and who is the minister, anyone of relevance.... so blaise makes his appearance... the accomplice probably was an auror but he could be someone else... someone like the minister or blaise.. or someone like that ???