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A wonderful and touching story, with a fluidity and grace that many stories now lack. Despite the HP background, the way you've crafted your characters gives them their own life, giving this story a more independent and holistic vibe. All in all, this was a lovely piece of writing that moved me in all the right places. =) Good work.

WOW that was just great. Very nicely done

This was one of the loveliest pieces of fanfiction I've ever read. Thank you for writing it.

THAT was fantastic. Your characterization was spot on, and the plot was absolutely fascinating. Bravo!

Wow, this is intense. And that mating dance Harry did for Severus it really makes you curious as to how Harrys instincts are going to want them having sex. I like the kids, how James tries to be strong and Al was so quiet and cool to Severus and how Lilly cried over the divorceand then tried for twice the presents.Frankly a story this long and well written I would expect to find in the Snarry Games at this time of year. Hopeing for more but if not love what I got ;)

It's very difficult to find the right words that will do this story justice. Breathtaking. Brilliant. Original. Imaginative. Awesome. All of them, and more. I loved the thought and care and imagination and detail you put into this and I have to say that this is without a doubt one of the most original plotlines I've come across. Just ....wow. Impressive. Bravo.



I'm adding this story to my Recommended Reading list.

That was brilliant! I have never read a story with a take on how Harry's gets wings like that!! It was amazing! Brilliantly done!!