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OMG you leave us with just a small taste of the next installment after you end this one with a huge cliffie. Please update soon. I can't wait to see what you do with Merlin's Tomb.

That was great! Keep the faith. You'll get through your troubles and be okay. Good luck and get the next story out when you can.

GAAAAAAAAASP! Oh, why does boys always misunderstand things?!?!?! They have to be together again, they have to!!! Ohohohoh.... I can't wait to the next part! I love this serie, it's so wonderful! I think you are a wonderful chapter, and one of the few who can make me like Hermione/Lucius.
Thank you for a great story!!!
Hugs!

chapter 11
Yay! A lot new chapters! I have been busy reading another story so I haven't checked on this, but now I have a lot of chapters to read! Whii! Hm... I wouldn't want to know how Hermione is like when she has her period, with that temper... ah, well.. shouldn't she have it during this month when she is on the Island? Or is she one of those lucky girls who get's it every 35th day or something? Hehe, well, if she does gets it, I wouldn't like to be in Lucius' and Severus' clothes :P
Severus really knows himself... but I would have to agree, I don't take he would be such a good husband.. at least not in canon, and perhaps this Snape isn't the most canon (that would probably be boring because then he would only remember what Hermione was like when she was 11 and never sleep with her because he wouldn't relise she had grown), but I think you keep him realistic, and that's enough for me. Really, if I wanted it canon, I would just read the HP-books :P

Ou... I read your author's note and... I know I don't have anything to do with it because I don't know you or anything. But hearing about things like this just makes me... sad. Wars changes people... and not for the better... I hope you will feel better.
take care

Chapter 12
SHE HAD THEM BOTH, SHE HAD THEM BOTH, SHE HAD THEM BOTH *Does a crazy little happy dance* and they kissed! Lucius and Severus kissed! Oh, goooooooods... that is soooooo incredible hoooooooooooooooooooooooot. Jeeeez, I get high only by reading it! I'm sooo jealous of Hermione! And those little sex-stories where just so funny :P That is a funny game indeed.. hehe...
Loooooooooove the chapter!

Chapter 14
*Gasp* What a cliffhanger! Oh, Harry is so evil! GRRR! And Lucius misunderstanding everything... ghaaaaa, that is just so.... irritating! Now she has to convince him she loves him! And Lucius will probably just think that "Severus will be better for her..." Gha! Oh, I hope Hermione kicks Potter balls off. Mehehe...
I will look forward to the next chapter!!! Take care!

Ha! I loved that she messed with them there at the end.

I feel so horrible for poor Severus. You have to cut the man a break. You had me in tears when he and Hermione had their sweet godbye. However I can see that Lucius is a bit slow on the updtake. One would think knowing her as he does that he would know how much see cares for Sverus on a platonic level. I am not sure I would even say platonic they seem so much closer. Although Lucius and her have a connection that can't be denied and seeing that with all the other nuances between them I would hope Lucius takes his head out of his ass. Gerat update I feel bad for Severus still. Can't wait for more.

Oh my! You have me in tears all the time here. That goodbye scene with Severus was heartbreaking. (You can always send him over for consolation, I will pay for shipping and handling.)

But then again i was in tears when Evil-Auror-Harry took Lucius away. They will sort it out right? RIGHT??

Oh, yes, there will be a third part. Whew. Just got to keep telling myself.

oh, please let both of them get her!! poor sev. :(