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Chapter 11: Oh dear, two wizards acting like jeealous, competing little boys. Hermione has been very detailed in her comaparison. Hmmm, which would I want?

Are they going to get high?

Their discussions on stimulations differing between men and women is likely to be valuable to both genders. I suppose Hermione is the cook? Or was it just her turn? Snape, at least, should be an adequate cook.

Lucius hasn't thought too deeply about what he wants from Hermione, except the obvious. I think you made a believable case for Snape's feelings which are convoluted to say the least. He's psychologically a psychiatrist's dream, with all his quirks. But, bottom line, he is a true friend for Hermione.

The two wizards are beginning to fit themselves into each other's lives as friends again. I liked that.

Oh wow, that was amazing, i loved the ending so much. A little bit of angst is always great, i almost cried when i read how sad she was.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE hurry with the next one, please. I really want to read it. You're like JKR everyone is waiting avidly for the next book, and the suspence almost kills lol.
-SG

Of course you would leave us with a teaser, wanting more. I've enjoyed the first two parts of the Adventurous Hearts trilogy immensely. You never leave us readers disappointed...except when you leave us hanging, begging for more of Hermione/Lucius, Hermione/Severus, or (in many a woman's fantasy) a steamy combination of the two. I can't wait to see what lemons (and plot, of course) will be in the third part of this great series.

I hope all is well with you. Thanks for the incredible stories!

Oh, I liked it very much! I hope their playtime doesn't create awkwardness when the alcohol and stuff wear off.

So, Lucius doesn't realize that she loves him, despite what Severus told him. I suppose it might be too much to ask for him to figure it out in this installment... will you make us wait for the next one? Regardless, I'm thoroughly addicted to this series. :)

I knew it! I knew that we would have to wait for the next fic for Hermione to finally admit to Lucius how he feels about her. Credit to Lucius that he loves her so much that he won't come between her and what he thinks will make her happy. Hermione is a lucky woman to be so loved and respected.

Ahhhhh! I really, really, reaaaaaaaaallly hope you start posting the next one soon. I wish AFF had notifications! >_<;

Such a great story!

I've never found much comfort in platitudes. I've always thought that everything happens the way it should, but in the middle of a mess, I'm still upset and unhappy. Though my situation is different (I'm filing, it's only been 6 years, no war), I've been told it will get worse before it gets better. I'm so sorry that you are going through it, though. I'll send happy thoughts your way.

Regarding the chapter... I'm glad that Severus recognizes his issues regarding a relationship with Hermione. He doesn't insist on a commitment knowing that she wouldn't be happy. As much as I adore Severus, Lucius is the better choice for her. Still doesn't mean they can't have a torrid threesome before settling down. ;)

This is a marvelleous fic I love the way you have drawn Hermione, Lucius, Severus and Draco. What happened to change Harry and Hermione's friendship so drastically.

That man needs to be rescued from himself! Bloody idiot!

Great, great story! Now I wonder, how long they