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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ohhh wow some nice heated words i think that lucius is beginning to break down hermiones walls....
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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow so the fantasy is out in the open that is interesting and she is becoming more open with lucius it seems....
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Again, more fun. Great adventure fic. More great visuals. I was sorry to read about you personal issues. I hope things are falling into a better place now. Thanks for writing such amazing fics. :)
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good God Woman! I was going to wait until I read the entire thing before posting, but I just read the chapter where the three of them do the deed and I think my head is going to explode! That was... I can't even think of a word to describe it. Un-freaking-believable.
I read the first installment of this story last night and really wanted to finish this one tonight, but I have got to get some sleep. So I'll be back tomorrow night to reread this chapter (LMAO!) and hopefully finish it and start part three.
I read the first installment of this story last night and really wanted to finish this one tonight, but I have got to get some sleep. So I'll be back tomorrow night to reread this chapter (LMAO!) and hopefully finish it and start part three.
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, before I begin reading part 3 of this adventure, I just have to tell you how much I am enjoying these stories.
I absolutely love the snarky, harder version of Hermione. Lucius's reactions to her "inappropriate" language and conversations were so funny. And the way they slowly were "forced" to find each other in that temple was so romantic.
Throwing Snape into the mix here in part 2 was even better. Making both wizards come to terms with how they feel about her, and her doing the same with them, was fantastic to watch unfold. Not too mention some serioulsy mind blowing smut between the three of them! I do feel sorry for Snape in a way, and I actually almost got teary-eyed when they had their little "goodbye". And oh, how sweet of Lucius to put her happiness above his and be willing to walk away from his "sweet, sweet witch" so she can be happy with Severus. I hope it doesn't take too long for them to get back together in part 3!
I cannot wait for my kids to go to bed tonight so I can start part 3!
I absolutely love the snarky, harder version of Hermione. Lucius's reactions to her "inappropriate" language and conversations were so funny. And the way they slowly were "forced" to find each other in that temple was so romantic.
Throwing Snape into the mix here in part 2 was even better. Making both wizards come to terms with how they feel about her, and her doing the same with them, was fantastic to watch unfold. Not too mention some serioulsy mind blowing smut between the three of them! I do feel sorry for Snape in a way, and I actually almost got teary-eyed when they had their little "goodbye". And oh, how sweet of Lucius to put her happiness above his and be willing to walk away from his "sweet, sweet witch" so she can be happy with Severus. I hope it doesn't take too long for them to get back together in part 3!
I cannot wait for my kids to go to bed tonight so I can start part 3!
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First are the reviews that I tried to leave for previous chapters but for some reason I wasn't having any luck:
Okay That was one of the hottest things I have EVER read!! With all three of them "together" and the kissing with Lucius and Severus.....*gulp*...and the tongue touching.....*double gulp*
That chapter was a smut-tastic masterpiece!
Now for the chapter before this one:
All this angsty, sexy love is a bit exhausting really, isn't it?! LOL. I am sure that you know better than anyone as you have to think it all up. Glad that none of them were harmed by the nasty people. They are pretty yucky. AND what is going to happen when they all get off of the island???
For This Chapter:
Harry is such a bastard! What the hell! You have got to get our man out of trouble in the next installment...please! And it was almost heartbreaking to think he is being carted off thinking that Hermione and Severus are going to be together when in reality they were calling things off romantically. Argh! *runs off to read more*
Okay That was one of the hottest things I have EVER read!! With all three of them "together" and the kissing with Lucius and Severus.....*gulp*...and the tongue touching.....*double gulp*
That chapter was a smut-tastic masterpiece!
Now for the chapter before this one:
All this angsty, sexy love is a bit exhausting really, isn't it?! LOL. I am sure that you know better than anyone as you have to think it all up. Glad that none of them were harmed by the nasty people. They are pretty yucky. AND what is going to happen when they all get off of the island???
For This Chapter:
Harry is such a bastard! What the hell! You have got to get our man out of trouble in the next installment...please! And it was almost heartbreaking to think he is being carted off thinking that Hermione and Severus are going to be together when in reality they were calling things off romantically. Argh! *runs off to read more*
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooo!!!!! Ugh, they are both so aggravating sometimes! Obviously, I am hoping this all gets sorted out in the next installment.
AND Harry is still a class-A Bastard!
AND Harry is still a class-A Bastard!
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Stoned Hermione is stinking hilarious! When she kept on bringing up Lucius's obsession with her arse I could not help my barks of laughter. So glad Lucius and Severus have come for her. This could get VERY interesting....Also, I enjoy that while Snape is not the cuddly type, he puts a lot of thought into her wellbeing and pressies for her, etc. The custom boots with the Gryffindor lion on the heel-how neat is that?! Quite romantic really.
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Squeeeee* Oh I am hoping that this is going where I think it is.....If I were Hermione I would be having major heart palpitations just from the idea of me and Lucius and Severus together....oh yes, that is VERY nice!
I also loved the end of the last chapter where Lucius "marked" Hermione then was told that was "base" by Severus and he proceeded to flick his cape and strut away! LOL! I can totally picture that. Wonderful.
I also loved the end of the last chapter where Lucius "marked" Hermione then was told that was "base" by Severus and he proceeded to flick his cape and strut away! LOL! I can totally picture that. Wonderful.
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A waterfall is such a sensual backdrop for a bit of "afternoon delight." As usual, stunning visuals. Lucius is so sweet! You can definitely see the differences between he and Severus...although I do still have a weakness for the latter, as obviously Hermione does as well.
BTW, in the previous chapter where Lucius was hexing the zombie-type creatures I was laughing my head off. And his explanation of he was "bored" was classic.
BTW, in the previous chapter where Lucius was hexing the zombie-type creatures I was laughing my head off. And his explanation of he was "bored" was classic.