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person mariteri
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are one of the best Harry Potter fanfiction writers out in the world. Your plots are unique, the writing is good, and your ability to keep your readers on the edge of their seats. It's a joy to read your work and you deserve every bit of the praise I give you. Keep up the good work and UPDATE SOON!!!! Please? Pretty please? With sugar on top? LOL!
Oh by the way, I totally loved the way you set up the sex scene and the after guilt. Oh this is going to be good and messy.
person crinna
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM

ahhhh you have such an exciting and easy flowing writing stile. i just started reading and before i knew it i was at the end of chp.5 and desperate for more. now don't take this the wrong way. i love Lucius and Severus, but it is almost a shame that you are using HP characters. you could easily do this for a living. i would buy your books. i do illustrations and occasionally fan art. i would love to do one for this fic do you have a particular seen that you would like me to do? i don't offer to do illustrations much anymore because i don't have a lot of free time but i would love to do one for this fic. if you want to see some previous work . http://s296.photobucket.com/albums/mm161/crinna79/

person Jesse
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is very good!! I love this series! Great job on everything! I hope we get a Lucius/Hermione/Severus scene! That would be great!! Can't wait for more
person kymmy
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like the re-write. I thought the 1st version was pretty good, but this is so much better with all the additional info and story line. You've got such a good concept, I can't wait to see where you go with it. I hope they both win, you've got me pulling for Snape as well as Malfoy. Looking forward to those updates you've promised ;-) .
person Larrabee
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope she ends up with Severus. Lucius. Severus!

*smad*

Your an amazing writer, I can't wait for more.
person ilke
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, I'm chomping at the bit here! Loved, loved, LOVES Hermione's drunken/stoned confession. Ohh, I can't wait to see what you have in store for "our girl"!
person Angelbaby
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi fabulous SG. I've been without a computer for a whole month (AH!!!!!!) Bought a new lap top today and the first thing I did was check to see if you had posted anything and OMG not only the start of series 2 but a one shot as well. Congratulations you are the first person I have emailed on my new shiny computer. Loved, loved, loved the first 5 chapters of series 2. The thought of both lucious Lucius and Sev fighting over the same girl makes me swoon, damn she's so lucky although I don't know if I could pick which one myself. They're both dark, moody and gorgeous and yet so different, ahhh I think I would have to keep them both. Your one shot with Lupin was sweet, even though i'm not a huge Lupin fan. I love when you write your funnys so I look forward to reading your next fic with him in it. You always make me laugh. Am now going to send this, my first review on this shiny new computer dat-tata-da.........
person KellyJCR
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow I was getting very excited about this possibly being a threesome but alas chapter 5 squashed that dream. Anyway I love the close relationship you have Hermione and Severus in. It actually suits their personalities she has always been extremely mature and intelligent. He has never stood for ignorance or silly schoolgirls with nothing but fluff in their heads. That being said I am starting to feel bad for Sev as I think Hermione will pick Lucius over him. I don't think I could pick between the two myself. Anyway can't wait to read more. Great job as usual!!!!!!!
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Great start to part two and if it is anything like part one, I know I will LOVE it! I would say update soon, but I am certain that you will. I can't wait to see what happens with the walking dead on the island and how things shape up between the two men and our heroine! And can I add that I am just a bit jealous of Hermione right now??? *blush* lol
person mariteri
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes! I have so been waiting for part two of this trilogy!! Lovely start, but if you could post them directly to me, that would be awesome too! LOL! Take care and post more when you can.