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schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter. can't wait for the next one.
person angeleye68
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brava!!! There are no words!! This was well waited for and you did an excellent job at writing the threesome. All I can say is lucky,lucky girl that Hermione. BTW, I liked both Lucius' and Severus' sexual fantasies. Although between the two, I think Severus' is better. LMAO!
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so so so good. But at the same time it was so bittersweet. Especially Severus's thought/knowledge that it would be his last time with her. It made my heart ache for him. But it was beautifully written. It was definitely a love scene more than a dirty smut scene, and for this story and the situation, it was definitely something that made it all the better. I can't wait for more!
person Cliobella
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! Your's was the very first fanfiction I ever read - it was "Draco's Dad" - and I have been hooked ever since. This one is amazing! Thank you.
person pumkin
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i hope things start to work out and make sense for you soon. i couldn't even imagine what your going trough but you sound very strong. my prayers are with you. thanks for a wonderful update. i can't wait to see what position you put them in next. update soon please.
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ancient greek porn......LOL thats great! i think its funny how lucius and severus are nipping at hermione's heels. they definitely do not want her alone with the other. i guess ther is only one way to solve that problem =) looking forward to the next chapter!

Keep the faith, darling, things will be whatever they are meant to be and you will be stronger and wiser for it!

Much love and smiles...

Lady B
xoxoxo
person Pamela
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so sorry to hear about your husband. Just try to stay strong in your faith, I'm sure it will all work out! On a lighter note, if you need to make extra money, you could sell the hell out of some stories, because you are a GREAT writer! I love everything you do. God bless!
person cab2000
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my dear, I'm so sorry for you loss. That is a horrible way to have handled things on his part, especially since he is not there to explain what is going on. You and your children will be in my thoughts. To quote a little girl I take care of "Everything is always okay in the end. If it's not okay, then it's not the end".
person Jesse
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear about that!! You just have to keep being so strong. Keep your chin up!
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM


Hi Snape_Goddess, I have reviewed many times, but recently with the problems of my computer and also the Lupus is evecting my hands, so I haven't told you how much I really am enjoying this story. As per usual the story is very entertaining. I love reading the updates.

I am reviewing today, because of your author notes. My hubby served several detachments away from home. Often is situation was taken against myself. But! During the Falklands war his letters and telexed was very negative. He came home and within a few hours asked for a separation with the option to divorce. I was gutted, but luckily he agreed to counselling, I will not go into details, but apparently he had lost several 'friends' in one of the battle, the counsellor came to the conclusion that he felt that he didn't deserve to come home to a family.

I do not know if your situation is the same, but, I just felt a tug of feelings, and I needed to tell you in the hope it may help your current situ.

My blessings and of my family are with you to You and yours at this time of hardship.

Best wishes,


Donavon.