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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think the only thing to say to that is *MEEP*
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a brilliant chapter...Sev fantasy is so naughty but I would love to see it played out LOL and Luci's is even better! I can imagine him in his robes, pale hair over one shoulder while I lick his earlobe and tell him all the naughty things I want to do to him =D. The threesome was hotter than hot! It was smokin, hehe.
Hugs,
V x
Hugs,
V x
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW WOW WOW WOW that was a totally awesome chapter! nice and hot and steamy! keep up the wonderful work!
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am watching the soccer championship and I missed the goal for Germany - I just missed it. I heard the fireworks going up outside and did not bother to stop reading for a second and turn my head towards the TV. You realize, that this is a HUGE compliment?
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mmm, let's see, did I like it? That question is rhetorical right? I mean, bloody hell! I feel all funny now and I'm still blushing. As I was reading, I could swear the temperature was rising in the room but turns out it was just me! Of course, the finisher was that kiss - yeah, I'm done now. Seriously, how did you even manage to write that. You're just too good.
Anyhoo, roll on the next chapter. I hope Hermione doesn't overthink what's happened and I can't wait to see what happens between her and Lucius (yum) next. Just exactly how long do they have left on the island? If Severus (double yum) is right and it is his last time with Hermione, what a way to go.
Anyhoo, roll on the next chapter. I hope Hermione doesn't overthink what's happened and I can't wait to see what happens between her and Lucius (yum) next. Just exactly how long do they have left on the island? If Severus (double yum) is right and it is his last time with Hermione, what a way to go.
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12: OH MY F***ING GODS!!!!!
ok.. now onto the real review... lol
First off, I have to agree that there are few things better than a wet head of hair on a hot night. It really does help cool me... (i have WICKED long and thick hair) Also, why does it seem like men's clothes are more comfortable for bed? lol
This is the second story I have read that has included a high Lucius and Severus, and while the other was HILARIOUS, this was just BRILLIANT! I LOVE seeing these two so relaxed that they are willing to play silly drinking games with Hermione. Also, how very Slytherin of them to use things that they KNOW she has done? lol Perfect! That entire conversation was better than most foreplay! I loved it! (and lol at Lucius getting sent off to get laid.. hahahaha)
And at last, the lemonade is served! Lucius kissing her while Severus fondled her breasts? That was almost too much to bear! The two of them kissing her...caressing her...teasing her... OMG! Seriously! And then the real action begins... Every woman's fantasy is to have two men fawning over her and lavishing her with their attentions and I am SERIOUSLY jealous of Hermione! SERIOUSLY!!! Them both going down on her at the same time almost drove me insane! When they finally found their way inside of her concurrently I think I died a little. When they kissed over her shoulder, I an certain my heart stopped for a minute! How incredibly erotic! I think I need to hunt down two handsome wizards, get them high and drunk, and then let them have their way with me. lol
I truly hope that this isn't the end of Severus and Hermione. She needs him in her life and I feel that he and Lucius are two totally different people who can offer her two separate things and feelings. Neither can give her what the other can and I don't think she would be happy with ONLY one or the other. And I really hope that these two don't break out into a duel over her. I don't think she would like that too much and it might force her hand into abandoning both of them. That would make no one happy. Perhaps this could be a semi permanent arrangement??? lol *wishful thinking*
And what of these creatures who inhabit this island? I am sure we will learn more, but who cares with all the smut flying around! hahahah (kidding.. kinda)
Great work! I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and can't wait to read it again when the next chapter comes out! (oh yeah. And I LOVED them bathing her and tucking her into bed. lol that was romantic!)
ok.. now onto the real review... lol
First off, I have to agree that there are few things better than a wet head of hair on a hot night. It really does help cool me... (i have WICKED long and thick hair) Also, why does it seem like men's clothes are more comfortable for bed? lol
This is the second story I have read that has included a high Lucius and Severus, and while the other was HILARIOUS, this was just BRILLIANT! I LOVE seeing these two so relaxed that they are willing to play silly drinking games with Hermione. Also, how very Slytherin of them to use things that they KNOW she has done? lol Perfect! That entire conversation was better than most foreplay! I loved it! (and lol at Lucius getting sent off to get laid.. hahahaha)
And at last, the lemonade is served! Lucius kissing her while Severus fondled her breasts? That was almost too much to bear! The two of them kissing her...caressing her...teasing her... OMG! Seriously! And then the real action begins... Every woman's fantasy is to have two men fawning over her and lavishing her with their attentions and I am SERIOUSLY jealous of Hermione! SERIOUSLY!!! Them both going down on her at the same time almost drove me insane! When they finally found their way inside of her concurrently I think I died a little. When they kissed over her shoulder, I an certain my heart stopped for a minute! How incredibly erotic! I think I need to hunt down two handsome wizards, get them high and drunk, and then let them have their way with me. lol
I truly hope that this isn't the end of Severus and Hermione. She needs him in her life and I feel that he and Lucius are two totally different people who can offer her two separate things and feelings. Neither can give her what the other can and I don't think she would be happy with ONLY one or the other. And I really hope that these two don't break out into a duel over her. I don't think she would like that too much and it might force her hand into abandoning both of them. That would make no one happy. Perhaps this could be a semi permanent arrangement??? lol *wishful thinking*
And what of these creatures who inhabit this island? I am sure we will learn more, but who cares with all the smut flying around! hahahah (kidding.. kinda)
Great work! I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and can't wait to read it again when the next chapter comes out! (oh yeah. And I LOVED them bathing her and tucking her into bed. lol that was romantic!)
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
holy fuckng shit.
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this story! I have been hooked on your writing for quite sometime and I thoroughly enjoyed The Temple. It got me antsy for the possiblity of a Death Eater sandwich. Your portrayal of Severus vs. Lucius is incredibly erotic and completely HOT. I'm eagerly anticipating how you'll be able to resolve Hermione's dilemma. Don't we all wish we could have Hermione's problems? I mean honestly, what woman in her right mind wouldn't want to be in between two sexy Slytherin men?
I can't wait to read more! Keep up the great work!
I can't wait to read more! Keep up the great work!
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Now I have to try to go to sleep. You do know it's hot enough in Texas already, right? I guess I'll turn the fan on high.
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What else could a witch want besides two thoroughly aroused handsome men who would do anything for her (or should i say to her)? LOL, brilliantly written, as is your usual standard..... Can't wait for more!
Lady B
xoxo
Lady B
xoxo