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It is too sad when you want both of Hermione's suitors to win her. And I love her with both. We all know that SS will back off for her though as he is the one that will want her to have her heart's desire. Excellent so far. p

SS cracks me up with his "can't love" crap. He just does not know what to name the feelings he has for her. Of course he loves her and while Lucius is taken with her, he is only at the "might" love her stage. When you see what SS is willing to do apparently ALWAYS to save her, it is sad that he will not get the girl (because he usually doesn't, does he?). p

I am starting to get the feeling that Lucius is going to bow out. It sounds as though SS knows himself and Hermione well enough to know that it will not work long term, which is sad really considering the way they feel about each other. Still love LM though so time will tell. p

That is one of the saddest chapters I have read. That SS finally found someone that truly made him happy only to lose her is heartbreaking. Add that to the fact that Lucius thinks she loves SS and that HG now thinks that she hurt SS AND that she has to save LM from prison, and you see that no one escaped the feeling. Boo hoo! p

All I can say is that I am soooooo glad that the third part is already complete. I would have been upset if I had to wait with the ending so sad. Excellent story so far. Thanks for sharing. p

I was very sorry to read about what happened with your marriage. I do hope that you will find some happiness in your life. I too am a military wife and My husband left me for my best friend taking all of our money and my 3 children on Christmas eve a few years ago. It was absolute Hell and I wouldn't wish that on anyone. Reading fanfics helped me to cope and brought me the only happiness I was able to find.My life has greatly improved and I still look to fanfiction for comfort. Thank you for keeping up with your work even though it would be understandable if you couldn't. All of my best wishes to you and your children, Jaimie

omg what a great chap.... yeahhh a threesome what a a great chap.. and i love how you wrote it severus was very demanding yet tender while lucius was gentle and passionate... fab job

hmm now that was interesting hermione has realized that she loves lucius and now lucius is seeing her with severus and has doubts hmmm great chap

omg no no no lucius has the wrong idea... oh wow so i hope that gets fixed soon.... so i totally loved the scene between hermione and severus very touching and oh wow harry was a jerk....

ohhh poor hermione and lucius they are both miserable and heartbroken over a misunderstanding.... wow harry is a dickhead