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Ooh, yay you updated!
Hmm, she's a death eater-sorta-kinda now... well, that's a change in development I wasn't counting on.
So does he really love or care about her the way he says he does? I guess I just never understood that with Voldemort fictions. I guess I have a hard time understanding how he can torture and crucio the living daylights out of her, then turn around and tell her how much he loves her and cares for her.
Are you implying she's pregnant now? It seems that way.
I've read your other stories, obviously, :o) so I'm wondering what the reaction to the Voldemort in this story will be if she indeed turns out to be pregnant. If she is and you write a epilogue, do you think you could put something in there about how he behaves as a father? I've only ever seen that in one other Voldemort fiction...and I think its an interesting concept, to even have a simple scene on his interactions with his own children. They story I had read with it in it, had shown him as a typical loving, dad...very different from the dark, sensual husband. I had really liked that a lot.
Oh well, update soon!
I can't wait see what happens when she goes on her little adventure with Draco, lol.
And yep...I read the one-shot -- though I don't see a lot of the same aspects in here as that one...did I miss something???

P.S.

If you need a beta, I can help :o)
SashaHalima@gmail.com

Hmm, Chapter 19... that was interesting and different.
Another rose horcrux story? Am I sensing a pattern? LOL
Update soon :o)

Please get a beta to read over your stories, there are some simple spelling mistakes, and gramatical errors. Also try and develop your plot a bit more, you seem to try and rush when you are delivering important infomation in the the story. It seems that the characters often figure problems, or mistakes out too quickly,and it leaves the reader confused as to how the characters were able to figure everything out in about a minute when it should have taken much longer. I really do enjoy your story, and I am not trying to be critical of you or anything like that. I just thought that I would offer you my opinion. You may take it or leave it as you please, I am indiffernt either way.

oh please please please write more i am enthralled by your story

that library scene was hilarious....with her making everything fall lmfao.

i dont like how voldy is raping other girls...grrr.

i also dont like how mione talks to herself alot..and heck even voldy does..its annoying to be honast..because i mean voldy or someone usually walks in on her talking to herself.but then again she doesnt have many people to talk to...so she cant be mute her whole life. hhaah

awwww hermione tortured ron. how sad. love how she knocked down the wall just to get caught and brought back to him. lmfao funny

its amusing how voldy has unicorns lmfao..didnt he drink unicorn blood in one of the movies?

also its kind of weird that he keeps on cursing..he says things that i would not picture voldy or tom riddle saying. lol.

i love that snape is in your story and is nice to her.......i wish draco was though.

inm loving your story so far. its great. very sad.
sad that he raped her..though to be honast i like sex scenes to be more descriptive...especially rape ones...but its still good