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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Keep going, going, going. I like this WAAAY better than the actual ending of book Seven. May I suggest the use of Hypothermia as a means of safe (sort of) stopping Harry's heart to produce clinical death? Madame Pomfrey would be able to supervise the procedure AND fix Severus' Brachial nerves. Risky, but legitimately used in cardiac surgeries.
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I am so excited you picked this story back up and extended it. Fantastic effort. I would love to see you continue. You came up with a very different plot concept.
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story: it has a good plot, well depicted characters and a tasteful sex scene.
Bravo!
Please, continue this story!!!
Bravo!
Please, continue this story!!!
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Should you keep going? Uh.....Heck yeah! This is awesome, I can't wait to see what happens!! Please do continue!
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
FBS
That was an awesome second chapter. I love that Hermione and Lucius are connected somehow and i was chuckling and Snape and Harry's mutual hate....
The Imperio, and the bubble and the fiendfyre used on Voldemort...Absolutely Brilliant!!!!!
Can't wait to see where your muse takes this!
Lady B*
That was an awesome second chapter. I love that Hermione and Lucius are connected somehow and i was chuckling and Snape and Harry's mutual hate....
The Imperio, and the bubble and the fiendfyre used on Voldemort...Absolutely Brilliant!!!!!
Can't wait to see where your muse takes this!
Lady B*
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is the best i read yet!!!
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Superbly written and I, for one, would love to read any sequel to this.
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Scary and so much more. *trembles a bit* Well done.
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! This is beatiful! Really, really beatiful! It might be the most realistic and honest story of how Hermione and Lucius could overcome their history I ever read.
Even if I am a great Lucius/Hermione (well and Draco/Hermione) fan, most stories just lack that. How could they forgive each other. How could SHE forgive the pain and the suffering? And how could HE overcome his prejudices? What could be his reason? Just the way you described it. It might be the only possiblity ther is...
Sabine
Even if I am a great Lucius/Hermione (well and Draco/Hermione) fan, most stories just lack that. How could they forgive each other. How could SHE forgive the pain and the suffering? And how could HE overcome his prejudices? What could be his reason? Just the way you described it. It might be the only possiblity ther is...
Sabine