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for The Last Gift

by AndreaLorraine

schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, keep going. Definitely!
person Mia
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This may be a bit presumptuous of me, but of course you must keep going. You can't leave it there. That first chapter was incredible by itsself. But this new addition...wow. Please, I am begging you, as long as your plot bunny lives, please continue this story. It is painfully good. Please.

~Mia
person Anon
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best LM/HG stories that I've read.
person ladydeathfaerie
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my. i've been waiting for this update! that was bloody
splendid and i do hope you continue.

one of the best things i've read in good long while! brava!

~blessings~
ldf
person electric nachos
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please keep going. i need to know what happens next. somehow hermione has a piece of lucius within her (she certainly DID!) and i want to see what becomes of the story. i look forward to following...
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1: I, of course, saw this at the GE Challenge and wrote a review then. I was completely blown away by the writing - so powerful, so vicious in its description of evil, and so oddly forgiving to a Lucius who had conspired with those degenerates, helped them, and hadn
person Shetan
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic - please continue
person CoCoM
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Should you keep going?!!? That is the craziest thing I have ever heard. Of course, you should! Any new update of your's is always exciting and I am especially pleased that your muse has returned for this particular fic. I love your alternate version of Snape's injury and now subsequent rescuing (Take some notes, J.K.!). I cannot wait to read more!
person ashmo21
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh My.... This is definitely promising!!! I can't wait to read the rest!!!...is there going to be an upadate for 'hungry, thirsty, crazy' soon???... Anywho, this was a great way to get a fix of your writing 'til your next update!!!
person ariannz
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, keep going...the first chapter works well not just as a stand alone piece but as the opening of a longer story. Chapter 2 leaves me wanting to read more (which is as it should be)