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Chapter 5: This story is getting darker and darker. An interesting conundrum. Is Hermione being totally coerced by Lucius

Wow, I can't wait to read more! I am so thrilled that I foretold Dudley's joining up with Harry to help with the fight.( maybe I have the sight, shades of Trelawney,LOL). Will they get to Hermione's parents or will she go find them in time, or maybe going there will lead Lestrange to them, OH no! I am also wondering if Voldemort is going to hurt Lucius by doing something to his good firends the Parkinson's. Hurry, hurry upadate soon!

Chapter 4: Lucius is in such a limbo

Chapter 3: Cripes! I

nooo don't leave us hanging here!!!

Zombies! Genius! Had tons of fun in this chapter, morbid as it sounds. Loved the way the line between the muggle world and the magical world is blurred by war. I liked it very, very much.
Oh no! Cliff-hanger... Meanie. Can't wait for more!

OOOEEEH don't let us wait too long for an update!!

Dramatic chapter. Lucius's grief is virtually tangible. What could Voldemort take from Lucius now that he has lost everything? Has he discovered Severus's loyalties?

As always I am impressed by this chapter! You accomplish to paint an image of a very human Lucius. Although he's grieving badly and breaking down at one point, he still seems to be a strong personality. I like that!

Nice update!

I like your Voldemort. I know, it sounds totally insensitive and positively hate-inducing, but I was quite disappointed with Rowling's portrail of the big bad villain in the last book. Well, at least near the end. I mean, we get this menacing, smart, cautious evil being over the six books and when the moment of truth finally comes, he is nothing but an incapable fool. I liked that last part of ch4, very chilling and every bit evil.
Loved the rest, of course. I like the slow details, the backstory you added for Lupin. He's one of my favourite characters and I was more than pleased by the attention you gave him. I can't neglect the way you showed Lucius's grief... very good, loved the way Hermione doesn't know what to do all the time. She always struck me a bit like someone who doesn't understand social relations very well, so she finds herself helpless when having to deal with sadness, angst and worry that are not her own. Proof of how Harry always avoids her in the books when he's in one of those states.
Great story, keep going and I'll always be there to lap it up like a hungry kitten. Kuddos!