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for The Last Gift

by AndreaLorraine

person Lucretia
schedule January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love all your stories, you truly have a way with words and I like that whatever you do you end up with a mystery or another to solve; you did the same in Hungry Thirsty Crazy and you are doing it again with this story. You leave so many possibilities opened that the reader can't help getting obsessed and addicted to your wicked little tales.

I love the complexity of the raw human emotions you manage to convey, I love the suspense, the drama, the unexpected and last but definitely not least, I love the sex scenes, you are one of the few authors that create believable, non-awkward, non-squishy and utterly delicious...ah...smut (ha, I love the synonyms that Word gives for this lovely word
schedule January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just got done reading all 8 chapters of this story and I can't wait for the next chapter to find out what will happen next. update when you can. please.
person C
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So this is the second story you make me watch - and wait for the conclusion, and I doubt that it will be a happy one. I'm looking forward to find out what happens next!
schedule May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I can't wait to read more. I hope that Lucius will be able to get back to Hogwarts and be able to take Pansy with him. I also hope that Hermione and Charlie can warn the others in time about the deatheater that is on the loose.
person kazfeist
schedule May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I didn't realize you'd updated. What an action-packed one. :D
person Bre
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That is an awesome cliffhanger so hopeful and suspenseful. I can only wait for more vengence (I hope; for the good guys of course)
person Selene
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! Please keep going!
person savigar
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! Nice chapter; yay for Charlie! Can't wait to see what happens next **bites nails**.
person Atrumnex
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was AWESOME
.....going into ditsy phase........
first i was like oh how koool
then i was like wow
then i thought "this is fucking awesome
i i was like OMG
then OMFG
then i screamed
then i sent my friend the link to read
and she was like
"OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:O The Carrows?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!!"
Ye and i was like wow omg omfg WTF
OMG again
holy fuck shit
it gets worse
Then i thought dude this is orgasmic this author is great
Congrats u have me hooked. Plz update soon
I like u rendering me Stupid
person Atrumnex
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
my friend says
"tell her the friend u sent the link to agrees wholeheartedly. and would happily rip her heart out as a gift to her for this fantastic fic... and would drain herself dry just for quick updates! lol"