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Yes, please continue this, I would SO read it!

I really liked this story. It was dark and very angsty, but it was well written. I really liked the idea of Malfoy giving Hermione his magic and it taking over in her for a while. I would love to read more, especially if you included other scenes like that, where Lucius' magic overrides Hermione's. (And because I'm a Lumione fan if Hermione were to have a little Malfoy from that encounter, well that would just make my story!)

You MUST, MUST, MUST continue this fic! I am now a desperate woman begging for the conclusion. How? Why? Who? These are questions that only you have the answer to. What an enormous tantalising glimpse and then....nothing? I need more!!!
Blessings
Amethystique xxx

~decides to throw her two knuts in~

Sweet Goddess, woman! The story was wonderful and I do hope that you continue it. It sounds like there is so much more to see and be done with it. I first read your story on GE, and I thought it was amazing. I'd love to see where you could go with it. (No pressure...)

Either way, it's a great piece of fiction whether or not you decide to continue.
But if you do: Keep up the good work, and best of luck.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! He is not dead, is he? NOOOO! Please, let Lucius survive somewhere save or lay there waiting for the Order. Please, please, please! (Begging) Then Moine could take care of and heal him. Is that too sweet?
Anyhow, its up to you how Lucius is coming back (I'm obnoxious, I know), but you should continue the story for it is really good and worth while. (As usual!)
I can see Moine carrying Lucius child (since Draco is dead he Lucius needs an heir and it was his plan down in Nockturne Alley), the Order being against Lucius although he rescued Moine, and him fighting against the murder of his former family and finally falling in LOVE with his new family, Moine and their child. Oh, yeah I know - too cheese and all romantic, but if not in real life then at least in my dreams. Don't let me starve!
Well, to make it easy on you (one of my favorite writers that you are/ okay, I'll cut it here), I say: Thank you and hope to read soon something from you.
LOL,Alex

A really interesting story. I would be interested in how you would continue this story.

WOW!!! This is incredible please, please continue I need more it's too good to stop there!!

I read this on GE while I was at work....got caught all teary eyed by co-workers! Loved it.


Happy Writing

~SG~

Well - I should have known it was you. You know I left a review on the Granger Enchanted web site for this challenge entry and at least I'm consistent. I thought the short story was dynamite there and I'm thrilled you're posting it here for other AFF readers to see. I don't think 'brilliant' is too high an encomium for this work.

Will you be continuing this or is it a one-shot? Either way, I'm just honored I got to read it. *wow*

SPOILER!!

Flowers - I do have a question. This was written with Lucius apparently dying in this first chapter. Since you are posting this in the Lucius/Hermione section and you intend to continue it, will you resurrect Lucius somehow?