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Wow! This story has literally blown me away. I hope you are going to finish it. Dark, terrifying and amazing!

This is amazingly good! Update please?

Me again. I was so hoping you would finish this story, but it doesn't look like you'll be updating anytime soon... Well if you ever decide to I'd love to see where you take this in the final chapters!

I just wanted to leave a review after this very exciting chapter! I'll leave another after I finish the story, but for now I wanted to mention what an excellent writer you are. Your vivid details and precise plot line are captivating and heart wrenching. Every single sentence you write has purpose and meaning and the sexual tension you've built between Hermione and Lucius is not only believable but painful to read. I can't wait until the end - you better not kill them before they have sex again!

Just two minor things. First, some of the chapter seem to have a formatting problem which makes them a bit hard to read. You have html coding in the middle of sentences breaking up trains of thought. If you have time I'm sure future readers would appreciate it if there's an easy solution to the problem. And second, I'm a biology major so I just thought I'd mention there's no difference in the DNA that one can obtain from a hair sample and blood sample - every cell in the human body contains the entire human genome. I understand the way blood has more of a macabre impact for the sake of story line, I just thought I'd mention it.

Great work! I hope you have more stories I can read in the future! Now off I go to finish the tale...

Sometimes, I come here just looking for hot smut. In such cases, there is plenty to choose from, if I choose to overlook horrendous grammar. Every once in a while, though, I find a story that suggests the writer was truly inspired, as if the characters were alive and speaking through the author. This is one such story. (I'm also a fan of anyone who saves Severus, since he's my muse.) I'm really enjoying your work. Keep writing!

Brilliant story, I'm so glad to see it updated! This fic has been one of the most dramatic, compelling stories I've ever read in the fanfic community. I really loved the information about our protagonist's auras in this chapter. Keep up the great work!

OMG, this is heartbreaking , poor Lucius. He has suffered enough. You is ebil!

I am writing to inform you that your story 'The Last Gift' has been nominated for 'Best Het' and 'Best Drama' in Always Hoping's FanFiction awards. If you approve of the nomination, please email me and I will add you to the Nominees.

I'm sorry, but this was the only way I could figure out to contact you.

Thank You,

Maddy

http:// always-hoping . 110mb . com

Fantastic! I can't wait to see what's next.

I LOVE this fic.. Seriously, it's the kind where you sit at the edge of your seat kind of fic!

I can't wait for the next chapter!