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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i cannot wait for the ball to see how draco ensnares hermione
i also like how you split it into two perspectives.
great story!
i also like how you split it into two perspectives.
great story!
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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank You, Thank you, Thank You!!!!!! I am so glad you have decided to update!!! Please keep more chapters coming I can't wait for more!!!!!! I love the detail of how you made Hermione only for Draco!!!! That is slyly possessive in itself!!!! can't wait for the end result! Without a doubt this is shaping up to be one of the best Draco/Hermione dominating fics out there!!!! Keep continuing it please!
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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow...the story line is amazing so far. I really cannot wait until Draco and Hermione get together. Keep writing.
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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
See, I'm not supposed to be reading any more new stories, I'm supposed to be writing...but I couldn't stay away from this yummy ass summary!!! I LOVE it so far, can't wait until he makes his claim and to see how Hermione reacts to it...this promises to be a delicious ride, please update...whatever you need to keep writing...reviews, cookies, a whip? : )
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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn, you're a fast updater. AWESOME. And Yay, he's gonna collect on his debt!! I cannot wait until 10am tomorrow. Sounds like Ron's a bit kinky...can't see what you're gonna write in terms of him. If you must bash Ron to get there, then so be it, although it will sadden me, I will not turn away, not when we're this close to Hermione being Draco's loveslave for life : ) I love the way you're writing her reactions to him and how he's thinking about her.
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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeaaaahhh you updated this story rocks... i love the control that draco has on hermione already and ooohhh what is going to happen the next day this should be good... boy ron is a jerk and i feel no pity for him i like a bad ron where draco has to defend hermione in one way or another i love it please do not be gone long....
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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great job!!!!Update soon please.
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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so Ron is NUTZ! lol. And idky but I love it and it works.
But what I am NAAAT getting is Draco's feelings? He seems way to content just bossing her around... I mean in the bedroom its alright but in all aspects of life? idk. I don't think Hermione would take it... especially not if invoked by a bond or contract. Knowing that she has to obey would make her unhappy I think.
Anywho, can't wait for more... Harry and the Weasley's should put Ron in Anger Management. haha! Can't wait for more.
Kudos on the grammar and spelling... what an easy read.
But what I am NAAAT getting is Draco's feelings? He seems way to content just bossing her around... I mean in the bedroom its alright but in all aspects of life? idk. I don't think Hermione would take it... especially not if invoked by a bond or contract. Knowing that she has to obey would make her unhappy I think.
Anywho, can't wait for more... Harry and the Weasley's should put Ron in Anger Management. haha! Can't wait for more.
Kudos on the grammar and spelling... what an easy read.
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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say, I really enjoyed this story. We seem to have similar views on how Dracos personailty is. Its actuallly somewhat unnerving, because Draco is almost the same way in one of my stories. But I like how you've made Ron, and the Life Debt. It's very intriging. I adore how you've set up the situation between them as well, and I'm very excited to see what happens when she goes to the Manor =] Update soon? Longxlostxwords@yahoo.com , if you could e-mail me when you update I'd appreciate it =]
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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good start up. Draco shouldnt want her too submissive I think