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by fatedsoul

schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey, i've already read the rest of the story, and i really like it, especially the fact that ron is a dom in his own way, onnly subject to herlione, but in your last chapter with ginny, it would be so much cooler if she got subjected to hermione and maybe even ron, him dominating his sister would be soo hot
person Mellow03
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, good story you wrote. Can put blood in it and anal-blow-job that is forceful but to submission from Draco with other boys. Finger-anal-job from either boys and girls to Draco, can include those three too. Can include that not just Ron as lover but Harry as lover to Hermione.
person Anon
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person mlui
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting story! Please update again soon!
person luvhp
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, they are really messing with poor Draco, lovely! You're doign a great job, and so is Hermione, lol.
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wheeeee
I love it
And I'm keeping track of this story
Hehehe, it's great how the golden trio are all naughty and bad, lol.
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still hot! I love that Hermione can admit to what she did to Ron and Harry and that they want to play to. This sets the scene for some diabolically wicked play and I know you have plenty of that in store. It's about time that Draco had the game turned around on him. Can't wait for this progress : )
person Anon
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think I've seen this somewhere before....
person luvhp
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT!!
There are not enough naughty Hermione stories and I absolutely loved that she got Malfoy good!! I do hope you continue...I'd love to see more.
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! LOVE the Dark!Trio...I can't wait to start this story again and travel to whatever end you lead us to....