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by fatedsoul

schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Im luving the way you think I cant wait for the rest :)
person sexysarah
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Yummy! I gotta say, though, that I would be much happier if Draco was there by choice, but unwilling to submit... But regardless, it's VERY well written, and steaming hot! Keep it up! Would love to read more, and will def. keep my eyes open for updates!
person Elphaba
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy Hell! That was amazing. I almost feel bad for Dray
person aleera
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
.........holy shit im in awww
person Elphaba
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter. I was reading this a FF.net but glad I found it here with additional chapters!
person Elphaba
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can not wait to see who has found them and what the Trio does!
person genna
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have read this story with my mouth open and my brow furrowed. I am trying to figure out when torture became sexy?

I guess it takes all kinds but ugh. I kept thinking that the *game* was a joke (maybe not my cup of tea) but Malfoy would be embraced and protected. No. Not in this story. Rape has never been fun for anyone I have known or talked to, this story is unreal.

After reading this, I can honestly say a school where this happened and was tolerated would be less than a magical place in my world. Good luck with your world.
person genna
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read Sins/Golden Sins.

I think I understand the psych now. Before it was about causing hurt and being equal to sexual enjoyment. Blah, yuck, what in the hell.

Now I think this is a power ride story mixed with dominance. I've never quite got the S&M thing. The way it reads it would never be my thing but at least now I get what you are trying to say.

What I don't get is how rape transforms itself into a dom/sub relationship. Is it that it is supposed to be Draco's quiet need that Hermione has picked up on? For me, this is transferring one need for another. Draco needs discipline because he has whatever he wants. Hermione bogards him into something bent and he defines an unmet need. When I read Chapter 11, Draco is trying to transform his fixation into something normative. Enter Blaise.

What in the world does Ron get out of loaning out his girlfriend? Giving her what she wants? For how long and under what circumstances?
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying this, showing the Dark side of gryffindor! And of the trio. Keep up the good work!
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Of course I had to drop some love....I really like the slow descent into evil we see going on with the trio. They're getting worse, and Draco seems to have some fight in him but knows his limits. I love that he's resistant to Harry though. It cracks me up. We'll see how long that lasts...