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for Sins

by fatedsoul

schedule December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Don't be so hard on Draco's punishment, he is such a beautiful especimen! Love this powerful Hermione, but could you put a little sugar on any chapter? You know something romantic for the 5 of them? Hey back to the computer. LOL
person Elphaba
schedule December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh I Liked it too! Interesting Love bringing Blaise in on it!


Seriously this is my captcha? withdrawkits
person Elphaba
schedule December 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow that was an interesting chapter
schedule December 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the dominant/evil Trio...and the fact that Draco has finally given in to calling Ron & Hermione Master & Mistress. Can't wait to see him give in to Harry too! Will definitely be looking out for the rest of this story!
person whatweareafraidof
schedule December 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
first i really like your story....

i diagree with you there are TOO many darco and hermonie stories... and most suck. she stop being friend with harry and ron, and they are jerks in these story..

i wish to thank you for have ron and harry in you story where they are not jerk... i really love that fact that ron is her equal, and is a master to.... i hope ron and hermonie and lavador can have some fun together.. ron should let darco suck his dick,

a few ideas let them play some games with there slave make the women not where panties or blow them in a public place... make them do think they dont want to do but have other people be around and not see it...
schedule December 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love love love those sins........ And of course this calls for more... LOL
person Jamie
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I followed a link here from a recommendation I found at LiveJournal for Golden Sins, then from it to this one where you said it was continued and Chapter 11 already up. There were 11 chaps posted for Golden Sins, and only 7 for this one, and it doesn't appear to be finished in either place.

I've really enjoyed what I've read so far and would like to finish reading it. Can you tell me if it's posted in complete form anywhere? If you could drop be an email at TheTrioMakesMeHot@yahoo.com to let me know, I'd be most grateful.
person mlui
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've finally catching up on all the fics I've put on hold. This is an interesting twist of Draco starting to /submit/. Anyways, please update again soon! =)
person Lady Jenny
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING! Really gripping, so to speak ;) Thank you. I deffently needed something diffrentcan't wait for the next update.
person Anon
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?