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by fbowden

schedule December 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice!!! If I hadnt know that this was a threesome I would have believed Severus death and maaan that progress was so awesome! How Draco had this conflict with his need and then giving Harry to Severus and wow the threesome was awesome <3 Loved it
person Darkless
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved it. Wonderful writing skills.
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy hell!!!! That was hottt! *frantically wipes blood dripping from nose onto keyboard*
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap, honey! That was hotness times by volcano times by sweltering! Phew!

I was so pleased when Snape and Harry had their conversation, it was great to read all the complications being explored. It was all beautifully written, as always! SP
person Jilliane
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM


*can't think coherently!*
person Jilliane
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Part 3)

"I am deeply saddened that you do not recognise the distinctive atmosphere, Mr. Potter, given that you spent numerous happy detentions here.


"Sorry to disappoint you, Potter, but I can assure you, I am no dream...."

"Indeed. How incredibly astute of you to work it out, but as usual you are only partway correct..."

"Shall I apologise, Potter? Did you think death had improved my personality? I can assure you it had no such beneficial side-effects."



The best thing, and the thing I love most about your stories, Flic, is that Severus is always, and unapologetically, Severus. Excellent!


More please!!!


person Jilliane
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Drat!!!

That should be "grief" in my previous posting, not "gried". AFF should allow editing of reviews!

Please hurry and update!
person Jilliane
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Part 2)


Yay! You updated! This story is quickly becoming an addiction. It's lovely, melancholy, sad, and bittersweet. So well written, as always from you, Flic. I feel sorry for both of them, but actually sorrier for Draco, strangely enough.

These two lines have me deeply intrigued:

"...this is so inherently wrong and Snape's going to kill him, but..."

and

"Another day, full of deception and not-quite-lies, of watching the man beside him silently falling apart."

Hmmm.....



Oh my goodness! Please update soon!!!
person Jilliane
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Yay! Another treat!

I can't wait to see where you're going with this, and what insights Draco has for Harry concerning Severus. Will Harry and Draco's gried draw them together, cause I think Draco is grieving too, in his own way. Or will it be a completely surprise ending. Oh! Please hurry and update! I'm captivated!
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yet another example of your brilliance that leaves me desperate for more. I love the emotion in this, and I can't wait to see where you take it.