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for The Itch Hex

by Pakrat

person Drakonis
schedule November 11, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Very good story I can't wait for an update

schedule February 19, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Pretty good, but you almost lost me when you said that Harry had to walk the halls in order to get to the girls' section and Hermione's room. Since when are the dorms set up that way?

schedule February 19, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Too many spelling and grammar errors to continue. 'Feat', 'waste', and 'lye'. Seriously? Try 'feet', 'waist', and 'lie'. Get a beta. Or a dictionary.

schedule April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story and I hope you plan on finishing this but I think you need a beta I noticed a few spelling errors like in Ch 2 "waist" not "waste". I'm not trying to flame it's just a well edited story tends to make more people thus more reviews.
person oldSarge
schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What fun they are having and so uninhibited. Please finish the last chapter.
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just wanted to say I absolutely love this story and can't wait for chapter six! Even though you said otherwise, hopefully it's not the last chapter.

Just one question. You mentioned a possible spin-off of The Itch Hex involving Ginny and Luna. Would that be them by themselves, or joining Harry and Hermione? Because if Ginny and Luna suddenly developed a mysterious itching curse and Hermione offered Harry's "special services" to help treat them, I think I would die! Because the four of them in a massive "Itch Hex" orgy would probably be the hottest story in all of the world!

thanks for everything you've created so far, and for everything that is to come!
person kmplease
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME, I love this story!! I really don't like Harry and Hermione but this story is just funny, perverted and a little romantic. Please continue with your story, and update soon!
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Conclude?!?!?! Blasphemy sir!!! Don't end this magnificent story! Can I pay you in tears?
person pfeil
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Shame it's almost over.

Harry taking what's his should be good, though =)
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see another chapter. This chapter was okay, but it wasn't my favorite. I'm not a big fan of watersports, but I could get used to it. But I dislike too much punishment. As long as we don't get into blood, violence, or scat, I'll still be VERY happy with this story... especially if Hermione still gets a good, deep buggering on a regular basis to help keep the itch away. ;-)