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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chap... love the relationship between harry theo and blaise... i like that you made them a little grouping... LOVED IT!!!!!
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update soon can't wait for more chapters good work
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August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just discovered this story today and I have to say that I am absolutely hooked.
You almost never find novel length Hermione/Blaise fiction especially without tossing Draco into the mix. It really was a pleasant and most welcomed surprise.
I love the relationship you have developing between Hermione and Theo. It might even be nice to Hermione interact a little bit more with her biological parents, especially her father. There's real potential there. I have to wonder though what's going on with Draco and Harry, I have a strange feeling you're going to have them paired up, while not my personal preference I don't see it taking from the story as it can sometimes do.
Also Draco cursing Hermione on Nott property, I don't see Daddy-Nott being too thrilled with that. He does seem to be very protective of Hermione. Still so many un-answered questions and possibilites. I can't wait to see what you have occur next.
You almost never find novel length Hermione/Blaise fiction especially without tossing Draco into the mix. It really was a pleasant and most welcomed surprise.
I love the relationship you have developing between Hermione and Theo. It might even be nice to Hermione interact a little bit more with her biological parents, especially her father. There's real potential there. I have to wonder though what's going on with Draco and Harry, I have a strange feeling you're going to have them paired up, while not my personal preference I don't see it taking from the story as it can sometimes do.
Also Draco cursing Hermione on Nott property, I don't see Daddy-Nott being too thrilled with that. He does seem to be very protective of Hermione. Still so many un-answered questions and possibilites. I can't wait to see what you have occur next.
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August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAHHHHH oh my draco is really bad..... ok sooo what in the world is going to happen... i know i know go to the next chap and i will find out
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August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG great chap wow draco is feeling remorse nice... ok so i love this story i hope you update soon i can not wait to see how brisco responds to this and i am looking forward to see how you portray lucius in this as well....
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yep that is typical ron... but it seems he was toned down a little i am sure that had everything to do with theo and blaise.... poor blaise ginny really was laying it on thick... and way to go theo being the protective brother you tell him
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice chap i think that hermione is starting to show some of her confusing feelings... i am glad that blaise let her know that he is there for her i think that will definitely help him get closer to her in the long run i also think that her seeing ginny be so overly sweet to blaise in the chap before also helped her to realize that she had something there instead of just friendly feelings... i can not believe tat theo punched krum way to go and he is definitely playing the brother role well......
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July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awsome update cant wait for more
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chap... i like how you threw in there that theo and hermiones mom was upset bc she was going to the grangers well of course she would be upset but she has to understand that hermione had 17 years with them and she just can not forget them bc she finds out who her real parents are.. also i liked how the grangers backed the notts and tried to help hermione understand their side of it ... great job
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow great chap again i wonder how ron will feel when he sees hermiones entourage i am sure that will stoke the fire... and mrs weasley was always one to get her feelings into things way too quickly... i loved the brief little interlude with blaise and hermione that was great.. i can not wait for them to start a relationship i am sure it will be very steamy... ok so i hope you update soon i am looking forward to seeing what will happen with ron