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Wow. That was a wonderfully done story. It wasn't all doom and gloom. I liked your jokes thrown in.

Was going to continue reading, but as soon as I read the names "Bender, Fry and Zoidberg" in reference to some sort of solicitor company, I stopped. If you can't use your own imagination for simple names, who knows what your plot and characterization is going to be like. Again, would have continued to read, had you used your own brain.

You are awesome. I love the Futurama reference. Youy also write very well. I can't wait to read more. I just couldn't resist reviewing about Futurama. It's one of my fav shows.

I am wondering if the Notts have any idea the hell that Hermione was put through because she was believed to be a muggle born? And it would make me dislike them even more that they are calling Weasleys blood traitors because they would easily marry a muggleborn. She should point out that it was a good thing that they felt that way or she would have had no adult support as she grew up in the Wizard world. Also, I am not clear on why she owes her father an apology. He owes her one and he owes Ron and Harry (as I am sure that it made him very uncomfortable) one. Brisco has made it clear that he is no different since his master was killed by Harry with their daughter's help. She is of age and I have to say that if I were her, I would be looking to live with Sirius. Also that Theo had to think about being nice to the only friend she has asked him to be nice to is way out of line since even the girls she hangs out with started out for his convenience. I really wish that everyone would stop shoving Hermione back to Notts as that has got to make her feel as though she has no where else to go. p

It is so sweet that there are so many guys that will come to Hermione's side if she is hurt. Growing up with only brothers, I can tell you that it takes a brave (or really scared) man to stick it out in the face of so many threats. Still think that Brisco is a jerk, but if her is willing to keep that part under wraps they can at least ignore that side of him...until the next time his bigoted rhetoric shows his true beliefs.
Thanks for giving Hermione a third party to talk to about what is bothering her. If she is going to force herself or be forced to remain with the Notts, she will have to learn to not let their beliefs bother her. There seems to be no understanding on her family's part where her feelings are concerned, maybe because they cannot appreciate how she and Harry and Ron were terrorized (even tortured) for YEARS before they finally won the war. They should also seek a healer to help them deal with the upbringing/beliefs that brought them to follow LV and cling to his preachings even now (for if they did not, they would not call another blood traitor and brag about muggle repulsion charms). Excellent story. I know that Hermione cannot fight with them 24/7 as her convictions were easier to uphold when she could walk away from them. Something she can no longer do. reading on... p

Excellent. Thank you for letting Hermione stay strong and keep to her convictions. I hope that stays part of your story. It is great so far and although this site will not allow reviews on all chapters since I am reading them in a couple of sittings. Please know that it is not because I am not loving your story. p

Very sweet story. I was worried about how you would work around going from summer to the end of the school year, but you handled it fantastically. This is my first Blaise/Hermione fanfic and i have to say i love and adore it. Thank you for sharing!

I really liked this story, and read it all in one go last night... It was well written and flowed very well. Big kudos!

~Spiritxx

I absolutely Love this story! Is there going to be a sequal, well if not I love it anyway!

I thank this is a good story, but i am mad at hermoine.

one feel that ron like her more then a freind, so instead of talking to him, she pushes him away. she hangs out with harry and not ron, she goes to a party and not tell ron, he does not understand that she just trying to stay just friends, all he see is she pushing him away that would be hurt full.

Hermione, what I have to say to you is none of their business. Can you send them away?"

"I could, but I'm not going to. Whatever you have to say to me, you can say in front of them," are you crazy, i have something to tell you they do not need to hear it, what if it was i love you, or i dieing of cancer or anyone of 50 things that he wanted to talk with just her about, the fact that she would not talk to him in privte hurt him.

and she throw how he feel back at him, and did not even say she was sorry for not inviteing him. out side of that the rest of the story is very good.